Superb work. Powerful.

Now this one I can see a bit of the dark side. There’s a deeply relatable element to this that transcends subject or time. Depending on the point of being, it fits multiple topics. We write from a perspective and when it’s shared, it develops unexpected layers. I would like to have seen it performed during your 15 minutes of fame. It must have had a tremendous draw to it, my friend

This makes me feel your pain. The growl had to be wicked on this song.

hugs dearest Damian I am person who doesn’t know how to stop loving… I feel this write very deeply beautiful soul ❤️

Your words transform pain into art, dear Damian! I feel your heart and soul dripping from your pen. Intense and beautiful!

Powerful piece of poetry Damian. Dark and intense! Great work here.

Well that’s simply beautiful.
💋

Beyond being so very literate, this poem simply glows with passion and gratitude. It gives me hope in humanity that such a person as you lives on the same beloved Earth as I. I feel very glad that you have experienced this and that I have at least a remote connection to your very special being, dear Elke. Warmly, Jim

There is a universe of emotion packed into this poem. When connection is made, miles mean nothing. Beautiful, Elke

Beautifully penned, Elke. Excellent write with such an honest message my friend. What a lovely tribute. Appreciate you.

Damian

Lovely Elke. Your poem warms my heart. Beautiful.

Brilliant work.

Beautiful, Elke. Those flashes of lightning bring visions of delight! Love your craft and word play in this!

Daniel

Chère E.,
Hope you’ll enjoy your weekend.

As for your beautiful poem, I’m with Jim M. Your truly felt (feld?) emotions shine through in every sentence!
A stellar write!
Keep them coming please!

I’ll be back tomorrow for another eyeful of beauty.
Warm regards, Gus

Oh, Sam, ewww! How could you! Didn’t you even think to include the delightful octopussy? Talk about a hand job! Wowzer!

Thanks. Noooo, Swabby Sam wasn’t drunk enough to risk his gooey duck with no octopussy!

The song is really beautiful, warm and joyous… as I was reading I could feel the melody and beat of it, I love the repeation and alternation between “I” and “you”, it’s like making vows between each other, a truly romantic and lovely love poem.

Beautiful work. Vivid and sharp.

This is a sweet read, and it is not annoying at all.

Chère F.,
Hope this finds you well?!

I do admire your talent and your writes, so I love a compliment if it’s coming from you.
Thank you so much!

Warm regards, Gus

a heartwarming, endearing ink. beautifully written. i enjoyed the charming, lyrical fluidity.
thank you, for your lovely words and a warm welcome, both are appreciated!
~ c

Chère C.,
Now nice to see you again.
I must have done something wrong, since the reply I typed was lost. Sorry for that.

Anyway, I am grateful for your listen. Also on behalf of Michael A of course.

See you around!
Warm regards, Gus

Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with layers of depth my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Chère F.,
How can someone be powerful and sweet at the same time?
Lovely, what a lot of ‘tastes’ in one poem!

Warm regards, Gus

and You my friend “stole” our interest and attention once again with your passionate and exquisite writing. I respect how each couplet both shows and tells us a story. Fantastic poem!

An espresso con panna to you.
Clay

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Oooh, very clever!

Really like that ending, tight