Hmmm, Dear Poetess? 🤔
Seems we're somehow destined.✨
And, that's okay with me when the opportunity to partake of your sheer genius pieces of poetic originality dance so brightly before these beguiled eyes upon the page, so delightfully captivating my poetically bardic pleasures.
For example, take this Pantoum-like suite of Free Verse...
Thank you, Syr 🍷
Not only one, but the TWO praise-filled reviews you've left for this romantically succulent Free Verse piece more than gratify my humble efforts to write for, share, and please my fellow 'n lady poets … and, that you "love" anything about it farrr exceeds what could...
Never keep a good woman waiting, Syr … especially, if she's your "wife"!
I always intend for my reviews and critiques to be gracious, inclusive, and encouraging … I don't believe in pats-on-the-head reviews.
Receptively received your "friend request," and was most happy to oblige … thank you ever-so much for...
The "comma" critique was because I assumed your intent is that "Hypochondriacally" in L6 is meant to enjamb with "Ill" in L7.
Hypochondriacally Ill, where the comma will effectively enjamb and join the two words, then pause the reader and steer them properly into "’cause he fought with a"....
(i.e.)
They grew...
Well, Syr Poet,
What's a simple bard to offer concerning such radically original, epic, artistic mastery … the sort of performance no legitimately died-in-the-wool, pornographically-infused throng would dare refuse a ticket to?
"Twould seem your creative imagination knows no limits, nor has a throttle or brake pedal … an outstandingly amazing,...
Hmmm, Dear Poetess? 🤔 Seems we're somehow destined.✨ And, that's okay with me when the opportunity to partake of your sheer genius pieces of poetic originality dance so brightly before these beguiled eyes upon the page, so delightfully captivating my poetically bardic pleasures. For example, take this Pantoum-like suite of Free Verse...
Thank you, Syr 🍷 Not only one, but the TWO praise-filled reviews you've left for this romantically succulent Free Verse piece more than gratify my humble efforts to write for, share, and please my fellow 'n lady poets … and, that you "love" anything about it farrr exceeds what could...
Never keep a good woman waiting, Syr … especially, if she's your "wife"! I always intend for my reviews and critiques to be gracious, inclusive, and encouraging … I don't believe in pats-on-the-head reviews. Receptively received your "friend request," and was most happy to oblige … thank you ever-so much for...
The "comma" critique was because I assumed your intent is that "Hypochondriacally" in L6 is meant to enjamb with "Ill" in L7. Hypochondriacally Ill, where the comma will effectively enjamb and join the two words, then pause the reader and steer them properly into "’cause he fought with a".... (i.e.) They grew...
Well, Syr Poet, What's a simple bard to offer concerning such radically original, epic, artistic mastery … the sort of performance no legitimately died-in-the-wool, pornographically-infused throng would dare refuse a ticket to? "Twould seem your creative imagination knows no limits, nor has a throttle or brake pedal … an outstandingly amazing,...