An excellently rendered work, Syr! 🎖️ Well struck in grammar, vivid imagery and emotional timbre, metaphoric fancies, and all around palpable appeal … left me with an eerie sensation, which I suspect, is part of your intent. The rhyme scheme is both entertaining, original, and would be creatively challenging to the...

Thank you most happily, Syr 😃 For "liking" those two lines and sharing my humble effort here … albeit, somewhat shamelessly out-of-sorts from the norm; seems I may have been attempting to somewhat correlate with our Dutch friend, Gus', style. But, I've slept a lot since; so, who knows …...

Hmmm, Dear Poetess? 🤔 Seems we're somehow destined.✨ And, that's okay with me when the opportunity to partake of your sheer genius pieces of poetic originality dance so brightly before these beguiled eyes upon the page, so delightfully captivating my poetically bardic pleasures. For example, take this Pantoum-like suite of Free Verse...

Thank you, Syr 🍷 Not only one, but the TWO praise-filled reviews you've left for this romantically succulent Free Verse piece more than gratify my humble efforts to write for, share, and please my fellow 'n lady poets … and, that you "love" anything about it farrr exceeds what could...

Never keep a good woman waiting, Syr … especially, if she's your "wife"! I always intend for my reviews and critiques to be gracious, inclusive, and encouraging … I don't believe in pats-on-the-head reviews. Receptively received your "friend request," and was most happy to oblige … thank you ever-so much for...