You are a thief
With innocence written across the face
You stole each heartbeat
The rapid and steady
You stole each breath.
The labored and the rapid
You stole time
Slipping away as I gaze upon you
As thieves go
You are one of the best
Not realizing you stole me
Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with layers of depth my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
Thank you, Damian. Since I have not been posting because of work I am trying to give a little more. Thanks cuz
Chère F.,
How can someone be powerful and sweet at the same time?
Lovely, what a lot of ‘tastes’ in one poem!
Warm regards, Gus
Thank you, Gus, for the compliment.
and You my friend “stole” our interest and attention once again with your passionate and exquisite writing. I respect how each couplet both shows and tells us a story. Fantastic poem!
An espresso con panna to you.
Clay
Thank you so much for that. Espresso con panna thank you Clay;))
🙂
Enough said with a smile. Thank you, Jim;))
Oooh, very clever!
Thank you, Willow :))
Hi Fia,
How are you? hope you are doing well.
I want to see you sometime for chatting, when you have time, i want to give my feedback on the site.
Usha Jacob.
Really like that ending, tight
Thank you ME:))