Willow you are a strength personified in this piece. Beautiful piece

Strong and do we say sensual or steamy? This maybe the first time we read you like this, tight

Chère W.,

Reading time Less than 1 min. A promise, a threat?
no need to dilute it for my sake. Since it’s in English, and I am intent to come to grips with the words, my reading time is less than 2 minutes. Alas…..
And I think it’s beautiful.
In fact I love your writes to bits.
And this is another one of them!

Warm regards, Gus

I like to watch people, but not in a stalker way, LOL. I am just curious in how we all are wired, and what gets out from inside our heads. Mannerisms, etc. Your piece here is a great mapquest to Willow. Not full of hype, but the nuances that make you unique. Well described, Willow.

What an amazing comment, Peter! Thank you! I try to approach erotica from a different angle 😊

Thank you so much, Thomas! I’m glad it conveyed the feelings behind the words enough to be seen. 😊

I love me some word play. And I’m not very conventional with my erotica, I guess. Thank you, bro 😊

This is the kind of poetry which I adore, I connect and bond with, I get jealous from! This is beyond beautiful my friend, beyond a very well written masterpiece, it runs deep so deep inside that it brought tears to my eyes. As much as it’s sensual and passionate as much as it bares your soul, the poetic, the wounded, the strong soul of yours, You are your poetry and how You should be treated is how Your poetry should be treated too, with care, with thoughtfulness, with feeling, with open heart and mind, those who don’t look beyond the words are not welcome. This is a sacred gem. You deserve a sky full of stars🌟🌟🌟 You are indeed special. Bless You 💜

I gotta take my coffee decaf these days. 😊 But my quill and I are always down for a gathering. It would be a pretty dull place if everyone was “same”. Thank you, Peter

Oddly enough, that chorus was part of the original poem. It just felt like a focal to me, so it became a chorus. That happens a lot with my songs, actually. This was originally part of poetry month entries, a couple years ago. Thank you for supporting my efforts, brother. So much appreciated

I think you’ve always been a badass you just didn’t realize it until today…. Do I have to go hide ? Or are you going to kick my ass for saying it?

Chère W.,
I’ll try and tell you what I feel in a foreign language, so please forgive my mistakes.
This eye candy poem brings back memories of the beauty you posted on/in DUP.

It’s no coincidence that I am a fan of your writes.

And yes, it’s important that you feel seen, cared for and loved by people who surround you. Very important and I think you deserve that too.

This is more or less the idea of the coop, recently posted with the very special and talented Drieks:

I’m Alive – Coop Drieks & Duhsjaak/Gus

Sloppy as hell and with hay fever kicking in full force, but you’ll get the feeling.

I don’t mean to be rude, but this thanking business is a very region tradition thing.
So:
if you’re American: thank you very much
in all other cases: I love your poem to bits and can’t wait for the next.
May your Sunday be beautiful!

Warm regards, Gus

Hahaha, standing on it Lady, to tight

Thank you, Brenda 🧡

Thank you, Peter

I like that quote! This is what one might call a warning shot that I’m about to clear out the closet. It gets messy after this. Thank you, bro, for feeling this and for your words

Thank you, Thomas

I’ll go check out the link. I’ve experienced a few of the coop pieces and much enjoyed the collaboration and words. Thank you, Gus

I don’t know why these comments are only showing up now for me. I had forgotten about this one. Thank you, Brenda 🧡

For some reason the comments for this one only just showed up, even though I see they were posted a while ago. Thank you, brother, these are trying times and more wood is always helpful for the bonfire