take a good look…
really study the structure
memorize…categorize…if you wish
every nuance…of this…
of me
when you run your palm down my spine
I want you to note it’s steely structure
how it holds firm against the ravages of life
and contrast that knowledge…
with how it curves
following the heat of your caress…
pay heed to its movement
as it speaks…
of what I lack the words to express
you need to understand
how complex I am
this body is…
more than a description
you need to read it…
like scripture
treat it…like a benediction
you’ll need both hands…
to truly comprehend the beauty found…
in the luscious spread of these hips
never forgetting…
they took extra time to form and align
blooming into their curvaceous expanse
birthing life against all odds
they give you solid purchase…
to hold on
the sway and roll of their rhythm…
directly impacted…affected…by yours
and these pearly pillars guarding heaven’s entry
so strong and yet so yielding
a lush welcome into the beyond…
where you will lose yourself…
and be reborn
sheltered within the shadowed haven…
of the familiar unknown
becoming divinity within me
now tell me…
when you gaze at me…
what is it you see?
With my virtual gaze I see a strong sensual woman who understands and accepts herself.
This is a terrific write.You do erotica differently,quiet yet loud,meek yet powerful,placing the reader right there with you.
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What an amazing comment, Peter! Thank you! I try to approach erotica from a different angle 😊
There’s a damn powerful sensual architecture here—the spine, hips, pillars, and curves aren’t just body parts but a language the lover is being asked to study, memorize, and understand beyond the limits of spoken words. The strongest turn is “read it…like scripture / treat it…like a benediction,” because it transforms physical intimacy into something almost sacred, while the final question leaves the whole poem hanging between desire, vulnerability, and the demand to truly be seen.
Thank you so much, Thomas! I’m glad it conveyed the feelings behind the words enough to be seen. 😊
Passionately penned, Willow. An excellent write with vivid imagery and some stellar wordplay my friend. Your style of erotica is really different, I think it’s because it has layers like everything else you pen. Amazing read as always sis. Appreciate you.
Damian
I love me some word play. And I’m not very conventional with my erotica, I guess. Thank you, bro 😊
Willow you are a strength personified in this piece. Beautiful piece
Thank you so much, Fia! 😊
Strong and do we say sensual or steamy? This maybe the first time we read you like this, tight
I don’t think sensual and steamy need to be mutually exclusive. Thank you! 😊
Chère W.,
Reading time Less than 1 min. A promise, a threat?
no need to dilute it for my sake. Since it’s in English, and I am intent to come to grips with the words, my reading time is less than 2 minutes. Alas…..
And I think it’s beautiful.
In fact I love your writes to bits.
And this is another one of them!
Warm regards, Gus
Sometimes the words just need space to settle in, I think. Native tongue or otherwise. Thank you so much, Gus 😊
I like to watch people, but not in a stalker way, LOL. I am just curious in how we all are wired, and what gets out from inside our heads. Mannerisms, etc. Your piece here is a great mapquest to Willow. Not full of hype, but the nuances that make you unique. Well described, Willow.
I think we’re a lot more than our architecture. We don’t really approach those details a lot in true intimacy. I like to look at things differently sometimes. Thank you so much, Styxian 😊
This is the kind of poetry which I adore, I connect and bond with, I get jealous from! This is beyond beautiful my friend, beyond a very well written masterpiece, it runs deep so deep inside that it brought tears to my eyes. As much as it’s sensual and passionate as much as it bares your soul, the poetic, the wounded, the strong soul of yours, You are your poetry and how You should be treated is how Your poetry should be treated too, with care, with thoughtfulness, with feeling, with open heart and mind, those who don’t look beyond the words are not welcome. This is a sacred gem. You deserve a sky full of stars🌟🌟🌟 You are indeed special. Bless You 💜
You have left me speechless with your beautiful comment, Light. There’s always more than eye can see. Thank you so much 💕
You are more than welcome, You deserve it all🤍