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Read MoreIt was pretty late, when I got up on that Saturday morning in August. I opened the first-floor bedroom window to let in some fresh air, before the heat of the day made it necessary to close them again...
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Oh my my Elke. I hope you know that I…
well you can imagine I’m sure.
How very hotly literate.
I’m inspired.
I wish I were your boyfriend…-
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Ha! Yeah you know, I let my phantaey run wild..,
Thank you so much for your wild comment, dear Jim!
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1001 times thank you for your wonderful comments, RPM!
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and for writing such an awesome comment!
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This is a good story. Enjoyed this (watch out, I’ll take revenge)
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Elke. Amazing story my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m glad you liked it, dear Damian! My gratitude and appreciation are yours!
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Sent gut! Delicious and steamy piece by you Elke! You were made for writing such!
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Herzlichen Dank, lieber Daniel!
Your awesome comment means a lot to me!
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Loved this piece Elke. Marvelous in your approach and delivery. A pleasure to read. Passionately perfected. xxx
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting, dear Fía!
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I’m so glad that you liked it dear Keith! Thank you so much for your awesome comment
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yeah delicious 😉
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Powerful work.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas this one is out there I’m you felt it💕
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Ghosteen wrote a new post
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Read MoreThe moon on her dress corruscates my fingers with cobalt shards of icebergs, rolling fingerprints beyond fabric Tidal hair breaches the breakers down her back, the last waterfall on earth weeps for every desire lost at sea Catching the pearls of her eyes in trawls of my dilated bleeding, if...
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You make me think…
It’s cool, I’m good at it!
I enjoy the complexity of your writes. The vocabulary. The nuanced messages. Even, a word I never knew until you shared it.
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As always, you are too kind Mark. I don’t miss many from DU, but you are definitely on the missed list.
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This truly shows your intelligence and talent. Very supernacular.
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Ha. I’m loving “supernacular” Sounds a bit like an Oasis song. Thank you A.
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I agree with previous commentors on the talent.
I like the analogies presented in this write.
Especially fond of the last stanza…reading this makes me feel like I saw her memories
just before they entombed her under the cathedral floor.j.
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Thank you.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian good evening 💕
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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
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Read MoreOn a day that wasfraughtwith anxiety and anger,I sailed onto theother side.The two pens thatblew up in my handforeshadowed theprolific writingstreak to come.Six poems today,a personal best.Bukowski would beproud.He might evenwonderHow I did it withoutwhoresbooze andcigarettes.It was easy.I had...
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lucky
I wish I could just let the telephone
ring
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Thanks for stopping by.
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hello dearest Thomas a day full of bluebirds and poetry lovely 💕
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THANK YOU.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate it. Thank you.
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I can relate. Well said Thomas.
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Thank you.
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A little Vivaldi can go a long way. I have been tuning in to classical myself recently. Better to soothe the mind with fine music than to stuff it full with world conflict. Good to find you here Thomas.
Chris
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Good to see you, Chris. Thanks.
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Powerful indeed & that’s a fact .. Neville
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Thanks, my friend.
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Really fun story you’ve crafted here. Charming, and sexy too!