She was made beautiful,
superficially flawless,
impenetrable perhaps.
Heaven sent, yet I knew
all lofty things crash
from the weight of conscience.
The gods gave her a jar
pristine, ornate even though
of human influences.
She kept it close, intimately hers
-Had vowed not to open it
if she hoped to reside someday
with those who proved their high
and mightiness.
She placed it upon her lap,
held close beneath her gathered skirt.
Its bronze hinges securing the warmth
a pulse, perhaps a glow
when, like now
her heat caused it to condensate.
It nestled in her dusk like a secret
that had waited infinitely for release.
A fearsome flaw, curiosity,
it’s a dry wine that intoxicates us.
We met due to our lack of sobriety in this.
I sat beside her,
close enough that our breaths
wove together in the seething air,
close enough that the jar felt
like a third pulse between us.
The latch, too, pulsed
stirring along the skin that encompassed it.
Like a vial of bottled lightning
if such a thing existed.
-Like an afterthought from Aphrodite;
her last touch a signature
upon this creation.
Pandora’s thighs quivered, the jar surged
as if a secret was trapped within
and it sought some truth to free it.
As I, with my insatiable curiosity
vowed to have an answer.
Her fingers hovered,
a tremor running through them
like a prophecy trying to speak.
I watched her hesitation
with the reverence of a mortal
kneeling before a sacred flame.
Not touching her,
only sharing the shiver
that rose from the seething latch.
The jar throbbed once
with an unmistakable urgency,
as the hairs on our arms lifted
as though our skin itself
touched electricity.
“Do you feel that” she whispered,
her voice a threaded question.
I nodded, my eyes fixed on the trembling hinges.
“It’s like the gods lost a heartbeat
waiting for us to find it.”
Her thumb brushed the latch,
a glistening spark leapt
like newfound insistence.
The kind that carries over our spines
and makes us mortals understand
why divine things are heavenly.
The dusk thickened.
The evening trees outside leaned
towards the door, sighing to the wind,
a calling to open it.
Let us watch, they barked.
Because, yes, all living things
have their own language.
But we couldn’t hear them
as our fingers hovered over the latch
that was growing golder by the teases.
It was a jewel, then, rivaling the jar
reddening, forsaking shyness to blush,
as if it wasn’t sure of this
‘tho it sought a breath of entanglement.
In that moment,
with our foreheads nearly touching,
and the jar trembling beneath our hands,
we felt it; the goosebumps of truth,
that some boundaries are crossed by desire.
By the hunger of two mortals aching
for the same heights of wanton entitlement.
The latch shifted towards my single touch,
soft as a gasp.
Pandora sighed and said to me
with a plea widening her eyes;
“Let’s open it.”
~
The wailing of the wind spoke of chaos.
The trees crossed their limbs
and even in the dark, were green with envy.
Pandora cursed me, this,
with a tongue unlanguaged.
But after all the commotion settled,
I was content.
I twirled some hope around my finger
like liquid strings, and promised her
that we will always have this to savor.
Because gods be damned, we have our answers.
~~~











Very,very good ink
Bat
Thank you very much, Bat. This one took quite a bit of work!
How’s Gotham? 😉
Two face and the Riddler are causing havoc
At least you’re not too bored then!
hello dearest Styxian this is so heady and erotic it’s clear you know the sex of the flesh in concert with penetrating soul… it is for the immortals and leaves one feeling like human sex by itself is unfair… beautiful ❤️
Well what a hell of a comment, Brenda. Thanks for that. I’m trying to find subjects a bit unordinary. This one was a leap!
Passionately penned, Mark. Another excellent write with superb storytelling my friend. Amazing read as always. Hope you’re doing well brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
I am doing well, Damian. A recent trip to Texas (to see Del) was awesome.
Thank you for the supportive comment, too. This one took quite a bit of work, and hacking up the lines, for days. I’m trying to be interesting for the reader/s, so any encouraging words go a long way. Thank you.
This form of poetry is so entrancing. “That some boundaries are crossed by desire.” Feel that.
Thanks Fia. I read up on the story a couple of times, and was contemplating adding more gods names dropped in it. But nah, I decided to keep it mostly intimate between the two. The idea was to keep it symbolic, erotic, but not to cross the obvious language of the obvious. lol.
There is so much power in this write!
Each line conjures such intense emotional pull. Like magnets colliding!
You’r waiting for an explosion 💥 that feels exquisite. You had me at the edge of my seat reading this. Hahah.
Phew, this was intense and filled with curiosity.
Loved everything about this and you!
not to mention the connection with the name “Pandora”… I was going to take and use a picture of one of the small jewelry boxes here on the(your) dresser. But the one I used works too I guess.
You know how long I messed with this write. I still see a little bit of edits… But I’m resting it. LOL
Hey, it’s no secret where such inspiration comes from, for me to get ideas like this! What!
Pew pew!
The splendor of your poem filled me as I read with a rapturous yet softly and darkly wonder. I could see Pandora with her jar and the first tentative attraction unfolding until that jar of opened and the tempests come. But after the storm there is a truth in her being that is irresistible and compelling in the utmost. I could feel this in my heart and it was a truly splendorous read.
John
Much appreciated, John. That’s quite a comment! I was really torn over whether to write of the result of the opening moreso. But decided to end it the way it is. Mostly because the write became a bit too lengthy, so I felt the need to cut it like I did.
Your comment is awesome, thank you!
-Mark
Absolutely tremendous. Powerful work.
Thank you much, Thomas. I did some homework and then several hacks at it before I considered it worth posting. I guess I’m trying to step out of my comfort writes and take on things that are interesting enough to push myself with.
There’s a feeling in the way you spread this that almost quivers with anticipation and eagerness. Masterfully written! Pandora is a source of much intrigue and this is an incredible twist on the story. Those last few lines were the perfect punctuation. I’m a bit in awe here
Hey Willow! Wow thanks for the boost!
I went back and forth on how to end this one. Do I take it more critical of the results? Or, let it play out without graphic detail, since we all know the story. And I wanted it kept at the human level, but not too obviously the physical aspect needing to be spelled out. Let the reader build their own imagery, right?
I really appreciate your enthusiastic reply. It’s good to know when our efforts pay off, so thank you.
Your articulation of intimacy, artistry and insight is just next level, Styxian
Sheer dopeness!!
Much appreciated, Naajir. I’m trying to not become stale or too “same ol shit” with my writes. So lately I’ve been reading up on a few ideas for insight, with my own interpretation of course. Thanks for letting me know it’s working out good.