Nice. Many quote-worthy lines within this. I like the contemplative approach of it. Well done.

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  • May 31, 2026

Anticipation causes as many heart attacks as does the activity! The pressure verses the release can be extremely volatile! Unless of course I'm so reading into this write the wrong way? NOT! lol

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A War of Indifference View Comment
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  • May 31, 2026

I think the biggest issue I had when I got out of the Army was "what now?". No chaos and yet no direction. It took awhile... Your words are poignant, and as a vet, well received. The write itself is strong, well worded, maturely thought out. I...

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Enter My River View Comment
  • @Styxian
  • May 31, 2026

Methinks a reader needs liquor in their system to fully grasp the depths that you go. Abstraction needs adjustable eyes! However you get your visions, keep it going. You make it into solid structures. Well built.

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  • May 31, 2026

How true is this write, in that what we read can inflict a certain degree of inspiration via feelings, or at least thoughts. It's all a part of how writers create a circle, so to speak, and the energy goes to and fro amongst us all. Awesome, enticing write.

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