Cleverly penned, Fia & M.E. Love the back and forth of the write my friends. Appreciate you both.

Damian

The pleasure is all mine, Fia! Thank you! “)

A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)

a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕

Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.

Damian

There was a wicked man
who had a wicked cock…

But I’m a wicked girl
who wants to rock your world

Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶

With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.

Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.

“Once Upon a Midnight sky
A rendezvous between you and I”

Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌

loved the combination of Spirituality and eross

Image amazing and words are blazing with intensity. Love it

A pleasant sweat pushes through my pores as I read this.
It’s so sensual, but so much more too.
As you know, the mind is the most erotic organ.
Nice job Elke. Thanks.

Nailed it….
Spirituality is sexuality.
😘

hello lovely Sappho divinely splendid so sexy 💕 you know just how to arouse…

Beautifully penned, Sappho. Fantastic write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hoi hoi
A very nice write, dear neighbour.
Painting with words.
Like it a lot!
Kind regards, Gus

Brilliant

Elke, das war ein brillantes Wortspiel! Und es schreit, dass die Liebe zur Seele besser ist als die Liebe zum Sex.

Elke, this was brilliant wordplay! And it screams that loving the soul is better than loving in sex.

Daniel
Gotisch-Surrealistisch

Vielen Dank für Deinen wunderbaren Kommentar. Daniel! Ja, das stimmt. Ich denke, dass an guten sexuellen Erfahrungen immer Körper, Geist und Seele beteiligt sind.
The union of body, mind and soul raises sexual pleasure to a spiritual dimension.

Powerfully penned, S. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello lovely poetess I can relate to this great write 💕

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. You wouldn’t be the first that felt that way, my own mother wanted to slap him upside the head a couple of times. lol. Appreciate you.

Damian

Superb work.

Reminds me of a poem I wrote around the whole invasion of iraq. The poem is lost to me, but I remember some of the lines were.

“you can go ahead and die for your country
I value my life over everything
and if I’m gonna die
it’s not gonna be me wasted away
for a bunch of fucking creeps”

This poem has fire and I love that.

I’m gonna say I would love to throw a shoe at Joey G. If Adira doesn’t get him with her boot first. Ironically, I know a lot of musicians. All young & vibrant…& all in Nebraska. It would be amazing to see your words given the credit & voice they deserve. My partner wanted me to do songwriting for musicians but I shut it down because I “only write poetry.” 🤦‍♀️ I would write with you any day though. And I’m keeping my fingers crossed that your words are properly heard, my friend