Once Upon a Midnight sky
A rendezvous between you and I
A secret plan that was never to be told
Was let out and all the others now know
I wear his mark that he had given me
Your eyes show there is no sympathy
Under the moon as the maiden cries
Under the stone he lays there and dies
No one wept and no one seeked
The truth of why we two had to meet
There is a wicked man in the town you see
So wicked he will get you after me
Once it’s all said and done
This wicked man will run and run and run
A poem with a tinge of Poe! Well done, Fia! “)
Thank you, M.E I love Poe.;))
a very haunting write lovely Fia 💕
Thank you, crimsin;))
Powerfully penned, Fia. Love the, Poe vibes, my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thank you, Damian;))
There was a wicked man
who had a wicked cock…
But I’m a wicked girl
who wants to rock your world
You already do.xoxo
Nice rhythm ‘n flow, Fia 🎶
With a Poe-esque like ambiience, you’ve creatively darkened the page with both spot-on and soft rhymes, spilt blood-shivering imagery … ever-so pleasing to the poet’s ear and mind’s-eye.
Your perfect title and artwork choices set the stage well for what’s to come, and that classic intro couplet surely awakens even the most passive reader’s interest.
“Once Upon a Midnight sky
A rendezvous between you and I”
Good stuff, Lady-Poet …
you’re such a pleasure to share with! ⁓ Rascal🖌
Thank you, and it is a pleasure to have you interpret my writing. I am still a student to poetry and I am learning from all of you. Thank you, Rascal
You make sharing poetry a sparkling joy, Fia ✨
We’re all students, who can always improve and never learn it all.
You’re well on your way to mastery … keep faithful to your passionate goals and dedicated to listening with an open eye and willing mind.
If you should ever seek a tutor! ⁓ Richard 👍