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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

D Minor

Poetry

April 17, 2025

17

Candlelight flickers against a dark ceiling Another tequila shot with a beer backer Writing blunt words forecasting a feeling This ink that stains the page like lacquer Miserable vibes eating from the inside out Spiraling deeper into famine and...

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- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  D minor is like most minor chords a wee bit sad.I like diminished chords which kind of fit between sadness and happiness.
  
  Good write dude.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. Glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve always liked D minor, Neil Young wrote quite a few. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Angels
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  This is something different from what I have been reading here. I like it.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angels. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  hello dearest Damian that refrain about not knowing whose real and being an opening for the headliner really struck my I could feel the emotion there this is powerful 💕
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I liked those lines a lot as well. I always have lines in writes, that I like a lot. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Tremendous work, my friend.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed the read my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Patricia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I can hold my own, and am always exposing truth. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write. Thank you for the compliment. Really means a lot to me. I love your take my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. Glad you enjoyed the read my friend. Nothing wrong with opening, you played that’s what matters. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Cool piece Damian. Love the D minor chord.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Would You?

Poetry

April 17, 2025

10

Would you take my handTake a chanceTo fall inLoveWould you spend a momentTo consider thatI may beYoursWould this be your only chanceTo have whatWas meantEternally

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10 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  In a heartbeat…
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Peter
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Seductive read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Beautiful work.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas;))
- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Have to take leaps to get that loving devotion. Wonderful ink, friend.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you Nick😊
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  What a lovely offer within the stanzas of this poem. Everlasting love. Romance poems are the best poems! Especially when there’s a sense of longing for someone who isn’t yours yet. Sweet write, Fia, as always.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you , Daniel 😊
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• 1 year, 2 months ago

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Crimsin wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

gothic

Poetry

April 17, 2025

8

My gothic romance caresses midnightWith a sigh and a weepMacabre lingers in the cemeterytalking to spiritsWhispering secrets to the dead, listening A darkened world beckonsand I become enamored by the oddbeguiling and honest, they covet a misfitintriguing the bleak in...

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7 Comments
- Crimsin
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  thank you most graciously lovely Patricia 💕
- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Lovely to see you on here, friend. Your ink is deep and layered. Paints a loving yet gothic romance.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously DC I’m happy to see you here too 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Passionately penned, Brenda. Love the depth and imagery. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you dearest Damian most graciously I appreciate you 💕
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerful work. You pain the scene well.
  - Crimsin
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Thomas 💕
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