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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post

• 6 months, 2 weeks ago

Final Retreat

Poetry

November 30, 2025

3

When Summer's heatgives way toautumn's bliss,I will kiss thisworld goodbyeand walk tothe woodsto savethe last sliverof my humanity,where the creekmeets the river ofmy destiny.Far away fromthe shitty city ofsick Streetsand brokendreams.

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3 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Willow
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  Totally relate…
  - Thomas W. Case
    6 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thank you, Willow.
Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”

• 6 months, 2 weeks ago

This is my “Magic of Poetic Voice” submission

The Beast Confession
Confessions are made to come from the heart
To make you feel the weight of it
Whether is it good or bad from the start
I need you to sit and understand me a bit

I wandered into a space without time
Alone with my thoughts
Never hoping that someone could be…Read More

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- RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
  6 months ago
  
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  This is my Magic of Poetic Voice submission
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  The Beast Confession
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  ·Confessions are made to come from the heart
  To make you feel the weight of it
  Whether is it good or bad from the start
  I n…Read More
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 6 months, 2 weeks ago

Unique Styles

Poetry

November 28, 2025

11

driven insaneblue and greysleek bodycobra grillheadlightscutting nightsengine roarsdual pipes wheels rollchrome artdescribingintricate fleshfingeringher six speedclutchingthat lust horsepowerequalsfrictionloving torquesport bodyinvitingthe curvestop down road readysoft highwaydrag stripstarting linemy mustangyour corvettewe embraceunique styles Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2019

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11 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  The fast pace reminds me of an engine revving up and going down a racetrack
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
    
    Damian
- Light💕
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  The beat, rhythm and pace is like a racing car! The reader wouldn’t know are You talking about a woman or a car lol. The closing lines are brilliant, and “unique styles” it is. Wonderful poem, to read it in the morning it fuels us with good energy to start the engine ✨
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Light. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That was the vibe I was going for I love when a write has more than one perspective or dual meanings. Thanks for that wonderful commentary. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
    - Light💕
      6 months, 1 week ago
      
      You are welcome my friend 😊
- Willow
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  Corvette! Corvette! I’m a ‘Vette girl. But that’s mostly because daddy was a Chevy guy and Ford was a dirty word around him. Once wrote a poem about a Mustang once though. Much enjoyed this one, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like cars in general, but I’m kinda a Ford guy though. Though I like Chevy’s too. Dodge is my least favorite. It was a dirty word around my dad when I was growing up. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  Cool dude. Great description. The energy & performance is highly moving. Excellent.
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- goldenmyst
  6 months ago
  
  This had the rumbling force of a corvette being geared up for a rip roaring ride down the highway. And to me it also read like a sensual poem about the power of the engine getting ready to fly like bat out of hell down the highway of love. Fantastic work my friend.
  
  John
  - Damian DeadLove
    6 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite things about writing, is having the ability for double meanings in a piece. Nice catch. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 6 months, 2 weeks ago

I'll Wait

Poetry, Romance

November 28, 2025

13

Not good with surprisesYet here you areYou approached timidly at firstThen the nervousness showedWhat was more endearingyour approach or the executionI was not looking in your directionYou made my head turnYou made my mind stay on younew questions and...

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13 Comments
- Sam Nash
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Oh yes… you have piqued
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    lol, Oh really?;))
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Piqued but not peaked.💋
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Haha, thank you Peter;))
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Passionately penned, Fia. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you so much Damian;))
- Jim Musics
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  An exciting time in a relationship. Clearly, beautifully stated.
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Jim;))
- Duhsjaak
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Chère F.,
  I was not looking in your direction
  You made my head turn
  
  O yes, definitely!
  Warm regards, Gus
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Gus
- Knight
  6 months, 1 week ago
  
  A very fresh read. Uplifting too.
  Regards
  James
  - Fia Naturie
    6 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thank you, James. I appreciate it
- Duhsjaak
  2 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Back for an eye full of beauty!
  What a way
  To start my Friday!
  Warm regards, Gus
Sappho (Elke) wrote a new post

• 6 months, 2 weeks ago

Point of No-Return (Collaboration with Duhsjaak )

Poetry

November 27, 2025

14

Point of No-Return Like pearls your tears glisten on the leavesA masterpiece of nature's magicSo marvelous and yet so tragicBecause it was us who caused your grief We live as if there was no tomorrowGlobal warming and droughts we acceptAs progress'...

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14 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  This is one amazing collaboration. WOW! The lyrics, music and image are stellar. Great work here!
  - Sappho (Elke)
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you so much for your kind words and your appreciation, dear Keith! Xox
- Jim Musics
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Fabulous work yoy two very gifted artists. 🙏
  - Sappho (Elke)
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    So glad that you appreciate our work! Thank you very much!
    E&G
- Duhsjaak
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  @visions of Insanity
  Also on behalf of Sappho, I would like to thank you for listening.
  The lyrics are about something we both care deeply about. And she was the one to write this inspiring poem. And artwork of course.
  
  Thank you so much for your very fine compliments. They go a long way!
  
  Kind regards, Sappho and Gus
- Fia Naturie
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I said it before. Wonderful collaboration ❤️
  - Sappho (Elke)
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Once again, our deepest gratitude, dear Fia! 😘
    E. & G.
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Powerful penned, Elke and Gus. Excellent collaboration you two. Great lyrics, Elke and excellent music, Gus. Your guitar tone has a little Neil Young vibe going on. Top notch both of you. Appreciate you, both.
  
  Damian
  - Sappho (Elke)
    6 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you so much for your kind words and your appreciation, dear Damian! It was entirely our pleasure to create this work!
    E&G
- RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
  6 months ago
  
  I bow most reverently to Sappho ‘n Gus 🙏
  
  Stunningly beautiful, You Two, in every sense of the word.
  Artwork choice, title, and the Envelope Form in its abba rhyme-scheme (with spot-on and soft rhymes), work perfectly together, just as writing and musical skills came together in rendering this lovely, impacting virtual masterpiece in homage to Mother Earth’s ever dwindling beauty and life sustaining wonders.
  
  Simply, an enthralling co-write … love it deeply!
  Thank you both! ⁓ Richard🖌
  
  Nits:
  (Check V1-L3, “get” may have been meant as “yet”. Final stanza, L1, should “plead” be “plea”?) 🤓
  - Sappho (Elke)
    5 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    I bow with gratitude to you, dear Richard! A breathtaking comment and the appreciation of a writer like you means a world to me!
    I have gratefully implemented your kind suggestions for improvement. As English is not my mother tongue I appreciate this all the more! 🙏
    - RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS
      5 months, 2 weeks ago
      
      What lovely sentiments you share, Elke …thank you ever-so warmly.
      
      You’re a beautiful person and wonderfully enjoyable poetess!
      A Most Happy New Year to You! ⁓ Richard🖌
- Willow
  5 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  I’ve written a few from this vein myself and no doubt we’ll write many more, trying to get people to pay attention. The both of you did an amazing job on this. 🙌
  - Sappho (Elke)
    5 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    There is a lot of work to be done to raise awareness of nature’s uniqueness and to call for its protection. But we won’t give up!
    Thank you from the bottom of my heart, my dear fellow campaigner, for your wonderful comment!
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