driven insane
blue and grey
sleek body
cobra grill
headlights
cutting nights
engine roars
dual pipes
wheels roll
chrome art
describing
intricate flesh
fingering
her six speed
clutching
that lust
horsepower
equals
friction
loving torque
sport body
inviting
the curves
top down
road ready
soft highway
drag strip
starting line
my mustang
your corvette
we embrace
unique styles
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The fast pace reminds me of an engine revving up and going down a racetrack
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
The beat, rhythm and pace is like a racing car! The reader wouldn’t know are You talking about a woman or a car lol. The closing lines are brilliant, and “unique styles” it is. Wonderful poem, to read it in the morning it fuels us with good energy to start the engine ✨
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Light. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That was the vibe I was going for I love when a write has more than one perspective or dual meanings. Thanks for that wonderful commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
You are welcome my friend 😊
Corvette! Corvette! I’m a ‘Vette girl. But that’s mostly because daddy was a Chevy guy and Ford was a dirty word around him. Once wrote a poem about a Mustang once though. Much enjoyed this one, my friend
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like cars in general, but I’m kinda a Ford guy though. Though I like Chevy’s too. Dodge is my least favorite. It was a dirty word around my dad when I was growing up. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
Cool dude. Great description. The energy & performance is highly moving. Excellent.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
This had the rumbling force of a corvette being geared up for a rip roaring ride down the highway. And to me it also read like a sensual poem about the power of the engine getting ready to fly like bat out of hell down the highway of love. Fantastic work my friend.
John
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite things about writing, is having the ability for double meanings in a piece. Nice catch. Appreciate you.
Damian