Styxian

S. Libellule
1 year, 3 months ago

Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Bat Powers
1 year, 3 months ago

Tight ink Have a great day!!

Bat
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 3 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 3 months ago

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian
Damian DeadLove
1 year, 3 months ago

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.

Damian
goldenmyst
1 year, 2 months ago

Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.

John
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Visions_of_Insanity
1 year, 2 months ago

Well said, beautifully penned.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Curly Grace
2 months, 3 weeks ago

Tight, clean, and atmospheric. The groove comes through in the writing.
- Damian DeadLove
  2 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, CG. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m glad the groove comes through, that was my intent. I hadn’t read this one in a while but it still holds true. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

Fia Naturie
1 year, 3 months ago

I love this story.
goldenmyst
1 year, 3 months ago

This is sensual beauty of the highest order, my friend. You take the scene and fly with it into the heavens. Love especially how you wrote of the respect he gives his sub, not hostile or arrogant but rather a piousness. Loved that ending. You write the scene with the delicately poetic brushstrokes of a true poet priestess.

John