Simplicity can produce brilliance
Sometimes less is more
Reconnecting through resilience
Sure seemed easier before
Drop the beat ride the bass line
Rhythm is raging hard
Ladies sipping on foreign wine
Melody is her calling card
Guitars solo over the groove
Distorted disposition
Tempo makes the mood move
In every position
Band’s jamming on this track
Music is tight
Got people dancing out back
Every single night
Well done Damian… nice tight rhyme
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, LDF. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
I really, really like this, Damian. Everything about this poem is fantastic. I’m with S. On this. Well done!
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Tight ink Have a great day!!
Bat
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
“Simplicity can produce brilliance. Sometimes less is more” = Keep It Simple Stupid (KISS). The rest of your poem reminds me of an old song “Rock and Roll All Night”
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angel. So glad you enjoyed the write. Yes, sometimes the song is enough, and there’s not always need for all the pomp & circumstance. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian here you have proved with great virtuosity that less is more. This is a tightly crafted poem that puts me in the scene. I could see the club with my very own visualization. Very well done.
John
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Well said, beautifully penned.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Glad you liked the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian