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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Here is Guillotine bi-trillets
The ring of steel bells. beckons us to hell
The audience ignores the sound
Multiple bodies hit the groundThe chiming goes on, sings a restless song
Unrelenting sorrowful tears
The heart shutters to stop in fearHope is so far gone, whispered please at dawn
Guillotine swinging in the sun
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Thank you
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![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
You’re ever-so welcome, Fia
My apology: I forgot an edit; V2-L3, (shuttering should be shuddering).
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It’s okay. That took me three tries. Lol
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YEAH, ya killed it!
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Benjamin Scraps wrote a new post
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Read MoreDrawing space, the beast lurks neargrit to wit in creep of dreampoor as dust on golden tearcarving eyes that shout & beamgroaning lines of spine & placedaze in sweet for kiss or bitemusky cloak of dusk & lacestars to...
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hello dearest poet I really enjoyed the style and subject matter here ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Benjamin. This write hits like a Mack truck my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Writes like this are quite difficult for the most of us. So few even try. Yet you did and you did it very well. The rhymes are solid and well thought out. Most of the cadence is kept moving fluidly. Along with an interesting storyline to boot.
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incredibly penned…compelling. your imagery captivating,
you weave words with amazing fluidity. i too very much enjoyed your topic & style.
~ chantepleure
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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
bi-trillets attempt. this one wasn’t easy for me…never do well when rhymin is involved.
endless night confession
breathe in the black smoke, love feels like a joke
the nights we wasted tasted strange
cheap liquor kiss, dirty exchangeyou were my worst itch, struck like a kill switch
old barroom lungs in borrowed light
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A brilliant submittal, Syr Dru
Congratulations on another successfully excellent effort in displaying such admirable skill in the true essence and grasp of that which is conveyed in these earnestly shared teaching sessions.
Your poetic potential is second to none … this piece is spot-on in every sense of the phrase: meter, poetic voice, i…Read More
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I wonder if we are readin the same poem. I really expected this one to get marked up with a red pen on all the places I went wrong. I appreciate your input and the lessons you’re providin. I’ll agree with you on fixin the rhyme so I’ll add the s to pain. but you’re gonna have to pry my lowercase letters and lack of punctuation from my cold dead ha…Read More
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Ha-hahhhh!
That’s a given, M’Friend, but I’ll never give-up on ya. 🤓
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Light💕 wrote a new post
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Read MoreLeave me to bethe sprite of dawn,calling poets and monksto inspiring realms.The raw gemstonesinside mountains or over shoresechoes of primitivenessare refined in them.The flower on a snowed branchrefusing to grow upthe tree, steady in all seasonsrooted in belief.To bethe...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Light. Into the book it belongs! Such a warm and lovely write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The warm and lovely is your review my dear friend💗 Thank You so much for this gift in this morning, I am really grateful 🤍 “into the book it belongs!” Beautiful words that will stick in my head for a while… ☺️
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Chère L.,
Hope this finds you well.If this isn’t a declaration of love, a poem to celebrate life? I don’t know what it is.
Love is!
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“declaration of love, a poem to celebrate life?” These sentences could be beautiful titles, new inspiring poems! Thank You for your very sweet review and inspiration my friend, I am grateful for your time and visit ☺️
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Chère L.,
If you find inspiration in what I wrote, please be my guest.
That is (just my opinion) exactly what a forum like this is about.Keep them (your poems) coming please.
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I did visit You and left You my print on one of your poems 😊
Keep yours coming too my friend ~
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I always feel a pang of pity for those who are unable to see it and fully appreciate it, especially those times when it’s poor pitiful me who can’t see it and not fully appreciate it, this inexplicable thing that drives us to observe & create. Thanks for the reminder!
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Good Day my friend~
We are all not perfect, and many times we miss an opportunity or a chance or even an inspiration, still don’t pitty yourself, as long as You are aware of if You will create your own opportunities and inspiration😊.Thank You for sharing your thoughts and for your kind visit.
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Chère L.,
I’ve been back for another eyeful of beauty.
Love the artwork too!
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Good Evening my French Friend 🌸
Thank You for giving my poem another visit, I’m grateful for your sweet kindness.
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Brilliant work.
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I appreciate your visit and kindness my friend, Thank You 😊
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A beautiful poem and make’ my eyes open wide.
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Thank You for the lovely words and kind visit my friend, I am grateful.
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Dearest Light💕 in my humble opinion, you could write poems & poetry for ever & a day and they would never be too long and nor would I tire of reading them .. No kidding .. Your friend, Me 😎💛🌻👍
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Dearest Neville🤍 You do know how to make this G girl warmly happy and grateful, your words and their sincerity mean so very much to me💕 thank You, thank You really and with all the beautiful good things✨🌺🌷🌸🌼🌻💐🌹🌿🌱🌲🍀☘️🪴✨
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Bravo, Fia. You know how to tell a story my friend. This is really good, can’t wait to hear more. Take a bow!! Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊 working on the next part
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![Profile picture of RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS]()
Never hearing your voice before, Fia 👀👂
I did not know what to expect, but I can’t say I’m disappointed in any way … actually, I was quite taken with how smoothly soft ‘n sultry, creamy ‘n smooth it is, as though my mind was being caressed through my ears on a warm, gentle breeze by a hundred dandelion flowers.
I heard no reason for the “Adult” sticker … YET, anyway. Now, at least, I’m prepared for any sweetly naughty surprise one might hope for!. ; p
Anyone ever tell you you’re a VERY talented lady?
YEP! That’s my outlook! ⁓ Richard🖌-
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Thank you, Richard. I put the adult sticker because I figured I might as well start from the beginning. lol
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Hmmm?
Gonna keep us hangin’ in suspense, eh?-
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Working on it. Had a head cold. I Sound nasally
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Ohhh, NO, Fia!
Don’t tell me you normally sound like Betty Boop? 🙄
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Amazing! You’re a talent!
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Gobsmacking good, Fia!
When you can take a form like this one you’ve never even seen before, observe a few easy details – then, with an earnest effort, turn it into such a creatively captivating poetic tale, makingi it seem effortless – now, that’s something to be proud of, because not everyone possesses this level of potential and/or natural…Read More