Brilliant, my friend.

hello dearest Neville I think you always meant somethingto this person… people come and go in my life and it is the nature of this fact that sends my soul wandering great write ❤️

Powerfully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend, this has layers. Nicely done, sir. Appreciate you.

Damian

How incredibly kind of you, I really am so very grateful .. Your visit, the time you spent here and subsequent heart-warming review means far more to me than you might presently imagine .. Kindest of regards & wishing you all the very bestest of all good things .. Neville 😎👍

I’m glad we are on the same side .. and won’t forget the kind gesture .. My mum was a Mary too by the way .. 😎💜👍

Neville, many snaps and hell yeses, plus a ‘bag of chips’, as an old friend used to say.

In a similar situation, my first wife had tears in her eyes when she handed me the papers to sign. Maybe it was thinking about failure, cause what she said was “we were supposed to be forever.” True enough, but we had both changed and couldn’t find what we once had. It was extremely disheartening, since it was her who had the affair and ended it.

Life is strange I think. Why is it that even as memories become “fragmented” and “distanced”, they never go away completely, they haunt, reminding me of my failure to love her better.

Curt

sentiment seriously reciprocated .. 😎🌻👍

This kind of put me in a sad mood, separation, memories… the human psychic. when we think we moved on, yet suddenly something comes up and everything comes to the surface. yes true, life is unpredictable, what we might think it’s love in a moment, later it might appears it’s not, what we were once, later we might not be. from togetherness to separation.

Very good. Nice Halloween vibe here

Frightening and jolly at the same time.
Much enjoyed.
Regards James

Thank you. I’m glad you like it.

Before we die, we need to read the book of longing. well damn. I need that book. Nice spill.

Being too kind is gonna get you everywhere, every time .. Bless you Fia .. Neville 😎👍

Passionately penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend.

“still tapping

on the bedroom

window

in the key

of F sharp minor ..”

Always dig a write that mentions music. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wow. Great write. It is what it is! I too like the musical reference.

Be sure to read her this longing, because I’m pretty sure she would join the ride…. passionate and hot!

Hauntingly penned, Tim. Logic over valor my friend. Excellent write you’re a great storyteller. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is good and had me laughing with the pedal to the metal.

Tim, this took me into the haunted rooms of that house and feeling the disquieted vibes as I read. Truly a master work of short story telling. Your descriptions of the broken window and dusty curtains made the scene come alive for me in full visual effect. As the story unfolded I enjoyed the narration and how it pulled me into the story. Truly great ghost story telling that had me fascinated unto that great ending where the message appears on his phone.

John