Why Nothing Falls Together
I cannot think of you without
my seeing her ..
Then I get the strangest feeling ..
It’s like a union
occurs somewhere between my
memories, perceptions
and our collective unconscious ..
But nothing ever
falls together these days does it ..
It just seems
to keep falling apart, as always ..
So when I do
think back on the times we once
shared, it now all
seems fragmented and distanced ..
Still, I can’t help but
smile at the tears you then shed,
for one moment
back then, I thought, I might just
have meant something ..
Brilliant, my friend.
That’s very kind of you Thomas, thank you .. Neville
I was lost in this, the interwoven story, it makes me want more. Much more.
Thomas is correct, brilliant.
How incredibly kind of you, I really am so very grateful .. Your visit, the time you spent here and subsequent heart-warming review means far more to me than you might presently imagine .. Kindest of regards & wishing you all the very bestest of all good things .. Neville 😎👍
My pleasure. And same to you, Neville.
Mary
I’m glad we are on the same side .. and won’t forget the kind gesture .. My mum was a Mary too by the way .. 😎💜👍
Ahhh. See? I knew I liked you!
sentiment seriously reciprocated .. 😎🌻👍
hello dearest Neville I think you always meant somethingto this person… people come and go in my life and it is the nature of this fact that sends my soul wandering great write ❤️
Bless you Crimsin, now isn’t that a fact of life .. Thank you both kindly and truly .. Write on and keep soaring ..
Warmly, Neville 😎👍
Powerfully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend, this has layers. Nicely done, sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thanks an awful lot Damian & then some .. Appreciations well n truly reciprocated kind sir .. Neville 😎👍
Neville, many snaps and hell yeses, plus a ‘bag of chips’, as an old friend used to say.
In a similar situation, my first wife had tears in her eyes when she handed me the papers to sign. Maybe it was thinking about failure, cause what she said was “we were supposed to be forever.” True enough, but we had both changed and couldn’t find what we once had. It was extremely disheartening, since it was her who had the affair and ended it.
Life is strange I think. Why is it that even as memories become “fragmented” and “distanced”, they never go away completely, they haunt, reminding me of my failure to love her better.
Curt
Ha’ you can beat an egg & a drum of course but you just can’t beat a decent bag o chips now can ya eh’ .. Thanks loads for stopping by these words of mine Curt .. it’s a funny old game isn’t it .. life I mean .. and what we can’t change or forget often makes for half decent poetry .. Kindest regards and best wishes for a bloomin brighter set of tomorrows .. Neville
This kind of put me in a sad mood, separation, memories… the human psychic. when we think we moved on, yet suddenly something comes up and everything comes to the surface. yes true, life is unpredictable, what we might think it’s love in a moment, later it might appears it’s not, what we were once, later we might not be. from togetherness to separation.
Please excuse my delay in getting back to You my friend .. thanks a million for feeling these words .. You can obviously see write through me .. I love your visits & your insights .. Your ever-friend Me 😎🌻⭐⭐☀️🌞💛👍
Never applied apologize for such things my very dear friend🌺 and thank You for your sweet response obviously Mr. Neville knows how to put a smile on G girl Face😊 Thank You 🤍