Dearest Light💕
You may not post that often, but when You do, for a moment at least, I swear You make the world feel a calmer and much better place by lending me the comfort of a warm glow, even in winter .. Neville 💛💛⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻🌻👍

Good Morning my extra sweet friend 😊

We all have a moment/moments when we don’t want to be strong anymore, and surrendering to whatever comes is not weakness in fact it’s an ultimate courage. Thank You for your genuine feelings and extra kind words💕 may peace always wraps your heart and mind 🤍✨🙏🏻🌻💖

Brilliantly penned, Light. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Good Morning my extra sweet friend 😊

We all have a moment/moments when we don’t want to be strong anymore, and surrendering to whatever comes is not weakness in fact it’s an ultimate courage. Thank You for your genuine feelings and extra kind words💕 may peace always wraps your heart and mind 🤍✨🙏🏻🌻💖

P.S; this site is annoying at times, I replied to You since You left your heartfelt words but now I noticed it’s not under your review.

Good beautiful Coffee Morning ☕ my lovely friend 🌺

Noooo worries, my poems won’t fly anywhere lol. Take care of yourself there and may life treats You only with kindness 🤍

P.S, You are Gorgeous! ✨🌺💖💓🥰😍

Superb work.

Cleverly penned, Tim. Speaking truth my friend, this has layers. Appreciate you.

Damian

Boom. You nailed it.

I like this! I may expound on this in a different way.

Finished it. It’s entitled Alzheimer’s and it will be posted tomorrow sometime around noon. My first posting tomorrow and it will be dedicated to you.

You wove this metaphor brilliantly my friend. Great raw poetry that holds nothing back. Great work my friend.

John

I enjoyed this immensely.
👍

Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hello dearest Tim this is beautiful I enjoyed the metaphors here… I don’t know how to stop hoping no matter what I pray you find belief an understanding of God as I have found him truly to be I looked at church and never found him there… then my scope widened and I found him everywhere ❤️

Man, I love the part where you found an old smile. The whole piece is great but something about those two words together made me smile. And no, it’s not old! lol
It gave ma a feeling of nostalgia. Wonderful write amigo!
Thanks for posting.

Powerful work.

Tim, this read like a man on a quest to find the joy he once had. You took this metaphor and flew with it my friend. I could visualize the old red jacket in the trunk and you finding it and looking in the pockets for what once was. Truly great work.

John

No, hope, could not find a way out of everything.

It is sad but you ended it with a bang. I love that you used the word stardust!
Even though she was tortured, you made her sparkle at the end.
Well done!

Powerfully penned, Tim. Not every write has a happily ever after. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Tim, this was softly explosive. Like a dream that comes true in a dark and sad way. Exquisitely written my friend.

John