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Read MoreLove Sonnet LXVIII If I wrote you a poem, would you hear me? Would you read me, swallow my metaphors, kiss my similes into oblivion? I only have words to offer, words filled with allegories, stories of how the moon holds my haiku, hoping to be next...
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Crimsin, thank you for your kind words on this poem. I am happy you found the ‘beauty’ and ‘feelings’.
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“…splashing alliteration on the pages of your heart.” My, my, how poetically defined! I love your sonnets. What a gift you have of writing them!
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Hi Kelly, you know I always love when I see you commenting on one of my poems. Thank you for ‘splashing’ some words on my poem.
As you can see, this is sonnet number 68, only 32 more to go. Then I will publish them as a tribute to Pablo Neruda.
I hope you are doing well. I must get over to WC soon and see if you posted some more poems there.
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Your love Sonnets are like flowers… each has its own sweet scent, beauty and allure. This is gorgeous.
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Read MorePiano Cello Interludes I am listening to music, piano with cello interludes, thinking about you. I hear the passionate sadness mourning from the cello as the piano weaves hollowness and melancholy from black and white minor keys. I feel the disconnect between the requiem’s movements and the reality of an alive,...
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a pure masterpiece dearest Clive I am utterly enchanted ❤️
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Your “enchantment” thrills me Crimsin, thank you.
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Read MoreCan I speak to you?raw and openof a once mesmall and soft like a snowflake,coarse and demandinglike the snow.of a once me,loved by one rulethe rule of infinite divinity.Wasted in the devastationof war and mundanenessa once me,never wanted youor them...
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Tremendous. Vulnerable and real. Powerful writing.
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Good Morning🤍 and thank You for your true words and kind visit. Much appreciated*
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Lovely thoughtful beautiful
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How kind of You😊 Thank You for your time and nice review.
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Read MoreElsie, Elsie, ring your bell,bring here all the boys.Summon back the ones who diedfrom where they were deployed.~Bandage up their arms and legs,Take away their fears.Erase the flashbacks in their mindsthat always re-appear.~Tell them it was just a dream,The...
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The poem was written with compassion and I felt it .
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Thank you, Fia.
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I love this! What a great read on Veteran’s Day!
Thank you for posting this.
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Wow! If he was alive I’d thank him for his courageous service. Thanks for the comment, Adelly. 🙂
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Tim, this really took me into Elsie’s heart and what she meant to our wounded men. I could feel the emotions here and the depth of your remembrance for her and the men she gave solace in their darkest hours. Truly a great poem.
John
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I appreciate the comment, John. Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write and a heartfelt tribute my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much, Damian.
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hello beautiful Fia beautifully written and inspirational my sister is currently a commander in the Navy she started in the Marines where she became the first female to be part of a Helo squad she has been deployed all over including Iraq… this write of your reminded me how important these people are to the peace we enjoy here thank you ❤️
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I gave Fia the message, crimsin.
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Excellent piece of writing Tim. Well said and emotionally driven. The words shine bright. Nice work.
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Thanks very much, Voi. 🙂
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Read MoreSomewhere Near the Far Side of Insight I don’t just look and see,but I watch and I savour and I learnand then I try to hoard what I find like you would small golden treasures ..Each strung out like...
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Brilliant.
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Thanks Thomas .. Very much appreciated mate .. 😎👍
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This is great writing Nev.
I loved how descriptive it is and how it connects with the soul.
How we all try to live for something greater while time wastes away.Enjoy Miami!
Im headed to Tampa in a couple of weeks!
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Many of my most heart-felt thank you’s Adelphina .. take care and enjoy Tampa .. I should be well on my way to Peru and Chile by then .. Neville 😎👍
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Powerfully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. Have fun on your adventure and I hope you find inspiration. Be safe out there. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks loads Damian .. will sure try and will let you know .. Neville 😎👍
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Neville, this poem was an artistic and soulful masterpiece. I felt the aging poet contemplating his life and its direction. Truly a grandly composed art poem that took me to places my heart often finds itself as I grown older. This resonates with me like a jazz song.
John
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bless you sir .. cheers n all that jazz .. neville with a very humble small N 😎👍
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This personally touches me deep, words I need to listen and hear today…
“I don’t just look and see,
but I watch
and I savour and I learn
and then I try
to hoard what I find”How beautifully wise this is, I want to try and be like this always but I seem to fail sometimes, you wrote it with genuine and true feelings. another sailing another journey another experience 🌞 🌊 and don’t worry about me I won’t fly anywhere, I will be still here 😁
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I just got the thumbs up to travel which was touch and go for a while because of my bad chest but now that I’ve got the go ahead, its all systems go .. I travel to London tomorrow & then get a flight to Miami .. from there I jump ship and head for South America eventually ending up in Chile .. Isn’t it amazing what lengths some folk will go for a bit of inspiration 😎.. I’m so glad You found this one .. You reading this particular little scribble is an honour in itself .. Oh’ and just for the record, we all fail sometimes and some of us more than others .. and also for the record, I do worry about You & wish You were were elsewhere, somewhere safe & maybe with me .. My goodness, would we ever stop writing .. Take care while I am away my very dearest G Girl & don’t let them get you down .. Your mate, Me .. Neville 😎🌻💛⭐🌟👍
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hello dearest poet this is so beautifully written brimming with feeling and the gift of writer ❤️