Can I speak to you?
raw and open
of a once me
small and soft like a snowflake,
coarse and demanding
like the snow.
of a once me,
loved by one rule
the rule of
infinite divinity.
Wasted in the devastation
of war and mundaneness
a once me,
never wanted you
or them to understand
strength is not endurance,
or the giving
strength is keeping the heart
pure, intact.
a once me,
called for resurrection
many times.
sought the revival
waited for rebirth,
not in spring
but in winter’s whiteness.
a once me
Faith.
God only knows
now and always
I am Faith,
still yours.
you can feel me
the wisdom of sunrises and sunsets
the thirst of less
the beauty of more,
and poetry in flow
between heaven and earth.
11.Nov.2025
This is excellent.
Thank You for your sweet words my friend, I appreciate your time and kindness 😊
As a rule, I make a point of never checking the comments left behind by my reviewing predecessors .. However, on this occasion, it was impossible to miss those three little words that were left by Adagio .. Not only are they incredibly appropriate words and more than befitting your latest poetic contribution, but they also expand your existing portfolio which I kind of fell in love with at first sight .. Furthermore, I know I have said it before but the quality of your ink is outstanding and its probably not a bad thing you don’t post more often because it would be too easy to willingly drown in .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🌻👍
P.S
I am honoured & humbled by your choice of Title 💛
The honour is mine💖 Thank You greatly for the inspiration, it was the first time in ages where I was able to write a whole poem in one day, and this was uplifting for me… Really “Thanking You” for your friendship and everything else… I do appreciate it a LOT 🤍✨🌸❤️🌻🥰✨💫💖⭐🌞
Me too .. 🌻🥰✨💫💖⭐🌞
What a beautiful piece of poetry!
The closing is exceptional! I’ve read this three time. Lol
🥰 You are so sweet and so lovely my friend 💓 thank You so much for putting a wide smile on my face🤩
This read for me like a deeply felt and passionate poem of love with very strong spiritual roots. A poem that sings of feeling that run deep and are profound. Loved reading this tonight.
John
Thank You so much for the heartfelt and wonderful words, for reading with care and feeling. Much appreciation*
Beautifully penned, Light. This is an excellent write with many layers my friend, I dig layers.. Appreciate you.
Damian
The thanks go to You for taking the time to read and leave your appreciated input here my friend, Thank You kindly*
Tremendous. Vulnerable and real. Powerful writing.
Good Morning🤍 and thank You for your true words and kind visit. Much appreciated*
Lovely thoughtful beautiful
How kind of You😊 Thank You for your time and nice review.