That is a cool ending. Nice poem

Powerfully penned, Adagio. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Though I wouldn’t call it a real collaboration since I only wrote the last verse but it was my pleasure, Thank You for asking me, and thank You for challenging me to write differently than my style. Be always inspired my friend, I like the picture by the way 😊

I am always open to collaborations. I tend to lean to the dark side, but my personality is opposite.

Powerfully penned, Adagio & Light. Amazing collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.

Damian

Enjoyed muchly…

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Thank you, Damian.

This is an outstanding poem, dear Abbey! The imagery, the metaphors, the soothing atmosphere – everything is beautiful!

Thank you, my friend.

People often say how beautiful and soft is a rose, but I always saw something deeper and here You’ve expressed it,That’s the strength of the rose, she stays kind in all the ugliness, she yeilds with the hardships… she grows with beauty even in the darkness. a power those only with pure hearts can acknowledge. Thank You for the lovely read my friend.

Thank you, Damian.

Gothic, fevered, and unflinching.
This reads like a candlelit confession written with bone and ink—decay made lyrical, excess turned intentional.
Dense, haunted, and unapologetically baroque in the best way.

Hauntingly penned, Adagio. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian