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Thanks C
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Thanks Adira
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This one has bones & flesh…& teeth. Good to see your words again
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Thank you Willow
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So insightful and well written
Much respect
Naaj
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Thanks Naaj
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Oh my goodness, Tim. This is just amazing… a three-way allusion. Such a beautiful interchange of reference from one to the other… withdrawal symptoms, sex, literary elements. I see the analogies melded together, the physical and emotional relationships. This is really smart. I love how you use rhyme in this piece and the second person narrative approach, which makes it more powerful. Very talented.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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DampKitten wrote a new post
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Read MoreI diethe common deathof a common lifesilent obscurityinsensitive dismissalinnocuous nothingan empty orbtransparent, delicate, meaninglessclinging to leafless branchesto hollow limbsanonymous bubbleawaitingatmospheric intrusionBriefly lived,adriftI bleedIridescent rainbow seedI breedsoap skin children
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A deep, grim poem that left me speechless!
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Surely not speechless, M.E.
Didn’t I tell you that you could burst my bubble?-
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Hopefully, breaking free. “)
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Ok, where is this seemingly endless depth you pull these words from??
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I’m so glad you like this, Drieks! It means a lot coming from such a deep thinker!
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Poets are running hot today….this is a real bloody cracker💋
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A bloody cracker? Whoa… that doesn’t sound very appetizing. Well, how did you know I’m a Vamp?
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Powerful. This gets me thinking.
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Blowing bubbles always helps me think, Thomas. Plus… it’s so sticky
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lol
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The way that I can relate; It’s almost as if, you’ve retrieved my exact thoughts from the endless depths of my mind. I love this. Absolutely beautiful, dampkitten. xx
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Thank you so much for this, PG! It means a lot. You are super talented.
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate it! So are you, I enjoy reading your work. xx
~P.G💋
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Wow… thank you! I’m glad you like this. I’m always wondering what you will think.
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Thank you, Dragon! Your comments are always awesome!
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you are never an everyday kind of woman .. and neither are your poems
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Well, maybe every other day. By the way, Sam… speaking of obscurity – your site is absolutely exploding, and my congratulations to you for your amazing success! I must say, you have the Midas touch, and you know where I’d like for you to put golden finger of yours?
xoxoxo
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JusTim and
nightbirdblue are now friends
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Read MoreI’d been treading water for days But it felt like an eternity It all disappeared suddenly Into a memory full of obscurity Ships passed by picking up survivors Giving many a chance to breathe While some of us stayed in the water Watching the depth underneath “Come...
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Permission granted. I like the use of the water.
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Thank you Fia. Now it’s time to explore doors and the hallways of this ship.
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Nicely done Wally…
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Thank you Cipher. I think I’m going to like it here.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. A very smooth entrance my friend. Glad to have you here. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I’m glad to be here, ready to go on a new poetic venture with all of you here.
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Thank you Adira. It’s nice to know that we all have that something in common and that we’re not alone.
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Welcome aboard. There’s a lot of spaces to explore
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Opening doors taking a look around and walking through this new digital space is exciting
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Hey Wally,
Good to you you
Your pal,
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Thanks Poet, I’m glad to be here and see you here too.
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Avast, matey! Mind yer cutlass and come aboard!
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Thanks Reggie, glad to see you here as well.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreMumm, I love the sweet taste of Louisiana. Nothing is better than having a full belly before a long trip. It's been 2 years since I stopped here in this town, unintentionally.When I arrived, it was filled with young,...
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Nice work here Fia. Great story that held my interest.
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Thank you, Keith. Let’s see what I can do;))
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Always dig your storytelling and dialogue my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. (Smiling)
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