Cleverly penned, Blue. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Go back and edit at the last two lines. There’s a space in the word “shoe”.

We always wonder if past lovers think about us… it’s a natural thing. Particularly at the grocery. And for all you guys out there that fucked me… yes, I remember you – particularly in produce when I’m looking through the cucumbers.

Seriously, Blue – I can relate. Now put your shoes in the dryer and go back for that check out boy.

The metaphor of the shoe in the washing machine certainly heightens the auditory senses in the overall underlying anxiousness.
Great work Blue.

Powerfully penned, Blue. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Or… the dude could have been a serial killer, and you missed out on a painful death. If Ted Bundy had been wandering around my campus when I was in school, just damn. I’d have jumped on that Volkswagen gearshift in a heartbeat.

I get you, though. Missed opportunity. It’s tough when you’re a girl. Guys think you’re being too assertive, but they always miss the signals.

Like Damian stated, I also found this powerful. Not everyone can make it to the summit for whatever reasons, but your analogy here is strong.
Nicely penned.

Loved this… great flow and authenticity…

Powerfully penned, Blue. This is a very deep write indeed my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

You bring up a point that self care and mental health should also be a priority. If we don’t feed ourselves, how will we have the strength?
Brilliant work.