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thank you graciously dearest Damian I know this one is out there but it is as I think I appreciate the love here ❤️
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You have a rare talent, the talent to write about dark in a beautiful and kind way… the darkness that we all have inside but few dare to explore, not the darkness of “evil” no no no… the darkness of pain, of loss, of hurt, of questioning…etc… that part of You which You alone seem to touch, know and feel🤍 This is very special, profound and moving not the senses but the inners. Spectacular💖
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hello dearest Light thank you graciously your comment really moved me I can only share what I feel sometimes feeling odd about it… it feels good to get such a lovely reception ❤️
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You are warmly welcome my dear💖 keep sharing your true self only as it is🤍🤗
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Senryu
HauntedA single tear drops
Haunted by her lost lover
Will always love him![Profile Photo]()
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Halloween may be over, Fia
But, you’ve learned the trick of keeping the ghostly treat of love’s forever haunting passion vibrantly alive, and what better than a beautifully laid Senryu to share it all with us in such a sweet way … maybe, a lover’s spell will be cast, returning “him” to your warming, tear-filled heart and arms.
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Read MoreGrim was her mood as she storms about,Fetid feelings abound.Her secrets kept none to confide in,Her love scorn her affections,Leaving her with a derelict affliction. Cursed among maidens,Her future was bleak and barren,Like all that came before her.She was a...
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Fantastic, Missy Brenda. A whole lot of haunting going on
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thank you graciously dearest Adagio I love this thank you for allowing me to be a part ❤️
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda & Adagio. Incredible collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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thank you graciously from us both dearest Damian haunting is what we were going for I’m happy it spoke to you ❤️
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Chère C.,
Lovely write!
It freckles me a lot…Warm regards, Gua
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giggles thank you graciously dearest Gus ❤️
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I think to be “captivating” is as you say, “…is risky it comes with danger.” Oh, to be a “danger” in this way, to someone again…. “SIGH”. Crimsin, those last few words (“but honey so do I”), wonderful!! Dare I say, “CAPTIVATING”? 😎
Curt
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thank you graciously dearest Curt for a sexy comment ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I deeply appreciate you ❤️
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Lots of sexiness in your latest pieces Lady, tight
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thank you dearest Me for feeling me on this I appreciate you deeply ❤️
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Read Morecracks in the foundationa skeleton of a structurehumanity under sedationtarnished blood no cureone more lost servantpreaching Jesus savesin these times so urgentwe're all their slaves do you believein something you've never seenwhy can't you conceivea metaphor so serene the body is...
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The interesting thing about this one to me, is that there are people who call themselves “of faith” and use the rhetoric but don’t walk the walk. I was reminded of so many of those people…especially in the current atmosphere of the world…they speak without real understanding and definitely no faith. As a man of faith now, I imagine you recognize the difference. As one who hadn’t come to that place yet, I’m not surprised you still called it out. You always take me somewhere with your pieces…often on a rant. This one is no exception, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. The phrase has been bastardized for sure, by those who choose to use it for personal gain, whether it be financial or merely for social status. Some treat it like it’s something that looks good on their Resume. Yeah, I see the difference for sure. lol. The younger me would have never thought I’d arrive at this conclusion. I’ve always called things out, somethings are a constant in my life I guess. Thanks for the killer commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. You nailed it.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As someone who lived under violence of many types for years, l can understand your intense words and feelings, for me I couldn’t lose my Faith at any circumstances, my belief is that the humans must believe in something( I’m not speaking only religiously) so they can move on in life without being completely lost.
“the body is a temple
and we all abuse it”I was touched by these lines, many many times we are not treating ourselves kindly. This poem is touching. Thank You my friend 💖
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Light. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That was deep my friend, but beautifully stated. I agree without faith of any sort (not limited only to religion) humans easily become completely lost. Sorry you had to go through violence my friend, you’re a survivor and a gifted poetess whose words burn brightly with positive energy.
That’s one of my favorites lines as well. I concur we don’t always treat ourselves kindly. I’m glad you enjoyed the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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And Thank You for your heartfelt and positive response 🤍 I’m glad You could find your way out and started a new journey where there is peace and comfort, may your days be filled with joy and Light💕😊 🕊️🙏🏻
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Thanks so much. And a peaceful journey to you as well my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian