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Read MoreI never plannedto keep it this longjust wanted a tasteoncethe way it sparked in my handsall restless heat and sharp edgeslaughin like it already knewI’d never give it backand maybe I didn’t mean tobut I held on tightertil the...
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thanks. twistin the stories from greek mythology to match up with my own shit. if that makes sense.
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“that makes the dark
look smaller than it”That right there says so freaking much…
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enjoy seein which lines sit with people. thank you willow.
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yeah? I played with few fitle options. not sure if they was my favorite. or if jsut grew bored fuckin with it. appreciate when get to see fave lines.
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“and it pulls at me
like it knows I’ll starve without it
like it’s grinnin in the dark
darin anyone stupid enough
to try and take it away”Powerfully penned, Ambjr. I connect with this verse my friend, but this has layers all throughout. Superb write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Morebeen holdin this notetoo long againnot outa hopenot outa love for the noisejust stubbornnessand maybe a little needto see who breaks firstthe soundor me I tend to push harder when it hurtspull softer when it begsand I don’t stop when...
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“scratch my thoughts onto paper
diggin graves to spill words into”Powerfully penned, Ambjr. Into the book it belongs! This one needs music my friend, unless you’ve already wrote it. Fantastic work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hadn’t even considered puttin music with this one. interestin thought. of course…got a few sets of lyrics that started puttin music to and never finished. so probably wouldn’t get done anyway. thanks damian
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hello dearest Ambjr this resonated with me Happy Birthday…I think about my death I don’t know if that will silence me…great write 💕
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appreciate it crimsin
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That is one powerful declaration there! Live out loud! And I’ll light the candles on your cake! Happy birthday
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thank you willow
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Rage and do not accept if you need to, it is your day after all.
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appreciate you fia
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appreciate it adira
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Read Moreyou acted like you cracked the codelike it was news that I’m a tickin time bombwith a charmin smilelike I haven’t spent yearsarmin and disarmin myself before breakfast bipolar 1:meanin I feel everythintoo hard and too fast? see alsopsychosis:so not everyone...
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hello dearest poet I understand a lot of this from experiences with myself I’m very sad today because of past failures with beings such as people and animals… I just seem to let them down I get mad at myself for my issues… I just really wanted to interact with somone today and it’s gone silent…I know it’s not so simple that there is no cure we do our best…sometimes it works others not so much… great write 💕
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really hope that today is better day for you crimsin. thank you
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I will not say I know what you are going through and deal with daily. I don’t, but I will say this is an open and vulnerable piece of poetry. That a lot of people will be able to relate to. This is very good.
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really appreciate that fia
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Powerfully penned, Ambjr. This is fucking raw and goes for the jugular my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you as always damian
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Nobody is a word. Labels are fearful constructs & a human tendency to control & feel in control, in my opinion. Why aren’t we just allowed to be? Stripping the polite away from truth here. Raw & powerful, this
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Oh gods…this one took me. Monsters never die, do they? They just move into the corners of our mind & lurk in the shadows
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they sure don’t. can’t fuckin escape.
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The eyes…the smell and the feeling all reminding you that its always a hairs breath away. Visual piece, Nice.
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yeah. thank you
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Brilliantly penned, Ambjr. I can relate my friend, this is an excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you
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appreciate it
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Great descriptions that are so real. You pulled me in and I couldn’t look away. Great poem!
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damn. thanks Tim
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You created a series. Can not wait to see how it unfolds. This is a nice opener.