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Read Morei dig with both handsmud swallowinmy wrists and forearmspullin downwardthe weight of the earthdraggin against my shoulders roots knot round my fingersknuckles cracked open by rocksdirt packed under my nailsrainwater runnin browndown my throatslippin deeperand the holekeeps begginto become my...
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Powerfully penned, 253. Another excellent write that makes me feel claustrophobic my friend. I too have written about quicksand or trying to escape the grave. Amazing read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moretongues tangledteeth tuggin at skinthe tv throwinthat tired blue lighttowards your face there’s tendernessthru the tension of itthe terrible truththat I could takethis momenttoo far inside me turn it into somethintraced thru my fingers twistin it into panicthat three years from...
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This is slow build to sadness. Think about the future but never too far.
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Powerfully penned, 253. Another excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Morenonot that versionnot that onenot the pieces stitched togetherouta all the thingsyou needed me to be look at mehold it theredon’t let your eyes slide offdon’t try to soften the edges so you can keep your image of me see me little...
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I felt one word “intense” Good piece
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Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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twofiftythree posted in the group National Poetry Month
almost
I was gonna jump
but I needed someone to watch
so I waited
and while waitin
the moment passed
and I forgot why I climbed
so I came back down
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I take it that you are sinking down into the mud. The more you pull yourself up the wetter the dirt gets making it feel impossible to get out of it. Interesting piece