dare you breathe me
not air,
dare I lit my love
in your eyes
in your heart.
on earth,
I walk my last time
undefeated and opened,
as I’ve walked heavens many times
I do know,
the difference between
the touch and the sensation,
between others and you.
look at me
what you see is you
in the original form.
look at my words
what you read is not poetry
but morsels of my soul.
©Gh
7.Feb.2021
When we write our words, we do leave pieces of us on the page. We are the words, we are the message that we want the reader to “breathe” in and savor. Your pen name, as one of the fundamental elements, is what is seen, heard and felt in this poem, Light! The air that words breathe!
-Curt
(ps. in your 3rd line did you mean to say “lit” or “light’ or “lite”?? I hope you don’t mind my asking.)
Good Coffee Morning ☕
PLEASE, share and ask anything, it’s how we develop besides my English isn’t the best😊
I mean the verb of “light”, lit, kindle… if You have suggestions or if You have other thoughts, I’m opened ears.
Thank You again for such a kind and heartwarming visit, yesterday out of nowhere the first words of this poem were ringing in my head, so I said there is no problem in sharing something old. I’m happy I did 😊
I love the idea of poems as morsels of our soul.
Lovely write.
And the pic is beautiful!
Hi my friend 🌺
Thank You for your lovely visit and sweet words You left on my page, much appreciated*😊
Truly lovely. It’s gentle yet strong in its invitation. A lure perhaps. Of allure!
It’s also lovely that You could see it as “gentle yet strong” because it’s what I meant it to be😄. short, brilliant and a truly appreciated review! Thank You gratefully my friend ✨
Everything they said…
What I love most about your poem is that you tell the reader that they see themselves in your words and your words are filled with light, with love. Such beauty here.
Thank you. The world needs more of this, of you.
Brava.
Hi there sweet friend 🌸
your words are gentle and calm, radiates with true kindness. Thank You deeply for feeling with it your heart🤍 may your days be filled with light, peace, and love✨🕊️💕
It was my pleasure to read you. And same to you.
I’ve checked some of your poems yesterday but there were unavailable to leave reviews, I thought I should tell You this 😊
Thank you for viewing my work. It’s intentional. You are welcome to read my bio for an explanation.
I did read your Bio before checking your poems, so all is understand, it’s your respected choice to protect yourself and your poetry at the time being, Nice to meet You Fiery friend 🔥😊
Hi there sweet friend 🌸
your words are gentle and calm, radiates with true kindness. Thank You deeply for feeling with it your heart🤍 may your days be filled with light, peace, and love✨🕊️💕
How I wish I had got here first .. I had been waiting for these words to ease or take away my hunger .. Having said that, I am not surprised that so many others beat me to them as I imagine those that have visited you before were just as hungry as me .. Another keeper as far as I am concerned .. Shine on dear Light now and always .. Your friend, Me .. 💛⭐🌟⭐🌟🌻👍
Neville never fails to make G girl’s heart smiles and flatter💓 I’m really and truly grateful for your words and friendship🤍 may your heart knows only joy and happiness ✨🙏🏻✨ your friend too, Me*
Yeaaaahhhh 😎💛🌟⭐🌷🌻👍
I can’t reply up there, but I’ll just leave it at this, so I don’t crowd your poem.
It’s been my pleasure to meet you.
Have a fantastic day (today, tonight, wherever you are).
The same to you lovely friend🌺 and a very Good Morning to you🌞 (it’s 10:31 am here). Have a fantastic beauty day, night and all times 🤍😊
Tremendous work.
Thank You my friend for your time and uplifting review😊much appreciated*
Beautifully penned, Light. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian