Fueled by a consuming rage
Pointed at every situation
As I fall into the final stage
Right before the initiation
Locked inside self-torment
Wiggling out of the noose
Keeping all the spirits dormant
Until madness is busting loose
Pressure building within me
Anger clouding all that I see
Face to face with destiny
Victim of the great deceiver
Tangled within this mutiny
Built by the great deceiver
Wilting on the forbidden vine
Loyal to the art of betrayal
Sinking to depths so asinine
Casted in a perfect portrayal
Divided about the reason
Squirming beneath a memory
Not the matter of season
That overloads my sensory
Paranoia only leads to doubt
Need to know what I’m about
Face to face with destiny
Victim of the great deceiver
Tangled within this mutiny
Built by the great deceiver
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
This is really good. Damian <3
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
Oh yeah, this one definitely needs a place on the album! I hope it’s coming along well! The halls are a bit echo-ey without you wandering them as often, my friend
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s going, though it took a while to get my “Logic Pro” software. Which allows me to mix better and I can even master my music with it. But, I got a song mapped out structurally, I have lyrics for everything but the bridge. Which I just came up with that bridge tonight. Gotta record vocals, and backing vocals next. Hopefully, I’ll be letting you hear it soon. I miss you too, my friend. You’ve been penning some excellent work my friend. Thanks for your continued support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
Powerful work. Superb.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Great work. I get an image of a man struggling with who to trust.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Pretty much. Appreciate you.
Damian
I get the sense of internal conflict, and the rhythm and urgency make it clear these are lyrics meant to be performed.
The energy builds perfectly toward the chorus: “Face to face with destiny…” I especially like the line “Loyal to the art of betrayal” – it’s a great, concise piece of wordplay.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
More great lyrics, Damian. Very heavy stuff. I hope to hear the music someday.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. When I get some songs finished, I’ll let you check them out. Appreciate you.
Damian
A kickin piece my friend. Your a gift to the world with your writing.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thanks for the continued support brother, means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
Damian
Well poemed my friend .. 😎👍
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
My pleasure entirely .. 👍