Here ends September,
count for me,
nine hundred letters
ninety words,
and a field full of wheat
breezing of abundance and grace.
Frankincense in the early morning,
and sudden rain.
this hold of autumn
is a complete magnificence.
unexpected,
conscious,
and it surrenders
to the greater wholeness.
‘That’s how I feel you.’
a hold of you
would be a palm
of autumn rain,
a grip of seasons’ marvel
at its glory.
and I am the calm at midnight
where the heart sings of sentiment.
The changes in a day,
of seasons and life.
don’t hold me for granted,
hold me the mystic of
uncertainty.
I am waiting for you,
under a new anticipated poem.
and untill October comes,
keep me beautiful beside you.
and read me every night,
a hold of you,
till I fall asleep
and become a vision of love.
©Gh
24.Sep.2025
The image that heads this page and these near perfect words will be visited many more time today by me (and I hope many others too ).. Oh’ and believe me, I have no doubt I shall hear & in my mind feel the cool rush of the first rains of autumn again and again .. But enough of that for now ..
I feel compelled to point out that in my opinion, You have poemed a masterpiece and left it here as a gift for all those who either stumble upon it by accident as well as those like me who purposefully made their way here .. I know for a fact I have waited a long time for it to arrive .. but .. & it’s a BIG and true BUT, I could certainly feel it coming .. I only hope, wish and pray that one day, a certain someone will realise or otherwise be made aware that such a beautiful love poem features them in all but their name .. I can only imagine how awesome a feeling that would be .. Wishing You Peace, Love, strong black coffee and All other Good Things from my world to thine .. 🌻⭐💛👍
I think Mr. Neville is toooo generous to this G girl to the point of spoiling, BUT it doesn’t mean that she doesn’t like it😊. Thank You for such a sweet, uplifting, thoughtful and most kind review, it surely leaves my heart smiling specially after this long time of no writing, considering my latest few years and months, I don’t know if I will be able to write frequently as I used to, but I want to and I will try to keep the ink spilling. Thank You again with EVERYTHING beautiful and EVERYTHING you deserve 💖 sending You many graces 🌸🕊️🌺💕✨
My absolute pleasure my dear Friend .. 🌻⭐💛👍
The image and aroma of “Frankincense in the early morning/ and sudden rain”, not only ushers in a beautiful love poem but entices the reader to go on a wonderful journey into the colors and wonders of Autumn, to a place “where the heart sings of sentiment”, and where someone can find the “mystic of uncertainty”. WOW!! Such delightful lines of poetry. And I agree with Neville, I too, hope that whoever this poem is for, reads it and comes to “read you every night”, and writes you poetry.
I am so glad that I found this poem, Light (an appropriate pen name), it’s extremely moving.
-Curt
That’s what I can call a heartwarming masterpiece review😊 with deep kindness Thank You for taking the time to read and feel my poem with your beautiful heart, leaving me this sweet gift✨ many bright appreciations Mr. Curt💖
Beautiful writing…sincerely.
Thank You my friend for your kind visit and words, I appreciate it😊.
I was immersed within seconds. You captured my senses and took me to another place.
Brava.
I meant what I said on your other poem. The world needs more of you. Your poetry calms.
Thank you🌸💕
You are so sweet, kind and caring my friend, thank You so much for leaving another lovely gift on my poem, deeply appreciated 🤍💖
My pleasure.
Tremendous work. I love it.
Thank You for your kind visit my friend 😊
Beautifully penned, Light. Excellent write with dazzling imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
I appreciate your visit and kindness too😊 Thank You so much for taking the time to read my poems and leave your thoughts my friend.
Days shorten
Dreams lengthen
Isn’t that’s right? Thank You for your kind visit my friend😊
“I am waiting for you,
under a new anticipated poem.
and until October comes,
keep me beautiful beside you.
and read me every night,
a hold of you,
till I fall asleep
and become a vision of love.”
Sighhh!🌿
I’ve been wondering to where such passionately blessed poetesses have vanished? Now, realizing the queen of romantic wonderment has returned, having only been on hiatus, tending to those fortunate enough in her life to receive the incomparable treasures of her gently giving, affectionately caring ⁓ free spirit.
Radiating from the thrilling ambiancel of “a hold of Autumn” I’m gently, irresistibly drifted back to those many moments I could not wait each day to run and read just such enthrallingly captivating sentiments of pure love, pristine beauty, and blissful caresses composed so warmly and tenderly sincere unto luck-lucky me.
Alas, c’est la vie … they live as vividly now as ever; yet, in the yearning depths of my heart’s and soul’s eternally grateful memory.
With a masterful stroke of her artistically-blessed pen, filled by virtue of her magical skills in blending words, phrases, and imagery into endless colours, hues, and textures, she creates a virtual universe that dismisses the world around us, sweeping (ever-so smoothly) every eagerly willing, captively spellbound heart awayyy … annnd, what a perfect photo to set the ambiance of this incomparably wondrous moment.
This illustriously rendered poem stands as testament to how powerfully enchanting a master’s pen truly can be, and ohhh, how I love and miss it so.
Thank you, Dear Ghounwah, from my heart for sharing this spellbinding poetic composition from your depthless well of precious love! ⁓ Richard🖌
Good Wonder Morning Mr. Syr~
It is a wonder-ful morning when someone reads such deeply sincere and heartfelt words, the most sparkling little stars dancing upon my page, but it’s not new from You The Master Bard and Reviwer, You always have been so generous and caring not only to me but to everyone even when You are giving advices for us, You did it without making us feel less or upset. I really appreciate every nuances You’ve left me here with your incomparable kindness and wisdom, I hope life is treating You with the same kindness You deserve but I also know as You’ve said, life is life.
Sending You many grateful thanks and deep appreciation and respect, Stay Well 🙏🏻🤍✨🕊️
Namastar, Dear Ghounwah 🙏
Namaskar, Syr Richard 🙏🏻