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Hi Fia! Oh yes, she was trouble! Thank you for your kind words. And thank you for this Stars Rite poetry site.
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Hi Curt,
I really enjoyed this – it has such a dreamy, floating quality, I love how it moves from the soft, floating imagery of dreams into the sudden jolt of reality. “And then you said,” ‘Hi.’” The image of a dream as “fire in a red dress dancing barefoot” is striking and memorable. It feels like a brief, beautiful moment where fantasy and reality touch. Dreams inspire me. This piece resonates with me
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Exactly RomaJ. Thank you. If I remember correctly, this dream woke me up. Unfortunately, there was no “reality” of her dancing in a red dress, barefoot or otherwise. Oh well. Dreams do inspire. It inspired this poem. Thanks again for your kind words and visit.
-Curt
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This is somewhat like Déjà vu to me. Something kind of jolts you, but in a way, you’ve felt it before.
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To be honest, I was roaming through some of my notebooks and found this poem. So in one sense, yes, there was some Deja vu involved. But it was a dream I had back then (2009) that found its way on paper.
Thank you, Tim, for your comment and perspective on this poem.
-Curt
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Curt. Amazing write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian, for your wonderful comment, your visit, and your ‘welcome’ to SR. I am glad to be here. As I get more acclimated to the site, I will do a lot more reading. Reading some of your creations is near the top of the Read List.
Thanks again,
-Curt
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Read MoreThat bubble of a moon isplaying peek-a-boo behindthe wispy night sky.Confirming to meeveryone's lunacy.Words stick to theroof of my mouthlike peanut butter.It could have beena better world,I should have been abetter man.January snowflakesare like guilt falling fromthe sky.little frozen...
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Looking back aint always easy or advisable .. even under the best circumstances .. But hey, I’ve got a thing about sushi so who cares .. what matters most is I checked in here and was not disappointed .. Nice one T .. N 😎👍
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Thank you, my friend.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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We’ve all got some guilt stuffed somewhere in our suitcase. I’ve got plenty of it on my sleeve. I just cover it up best I can and wear a good jacket those guilt flakes can slide off.
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Thanks, Tim. I appreciate it.
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I was caught by the title, I love the word “raw” and one of my poems are titled “raw”. Your title is powerful… and in your short poem You expressed the numbness, the despair, the coldness that lives within boldly. One of the toughest lessons humans must learn, that we are enough as we are.
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Thank you.
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I totally get this. Social media has hijacked our brains in a detrimental way to get clicks. People are going to have to wake up and purge themselves before life gets better. I see too many bad things especially on youtube.
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Social media is blatantly set up to keep us angry yet we all act like it’s ok. I mean I fall for it as well. It’s hard to ignore the bullshit. But they want us angry at each other and not the crooks on the Hill. It will only get better when we vote in kind people and stop hating our neighbors. Though at this point we are way too far down that rabbit hole.
Thanks for the read friend. Much appreciated.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Spitting facts my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Facts aren’t always popular but they keep my soul clean.
Thanks for the read friend. Much appreciated.
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Read Morethey will claim the bullet was suicidebawling over my tragic endI'm just writing this to let everyone knowI faked my own deathI'm done with the dramapeople always up in my businesswanting to know who I'm associated withtalking that bullshit...
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Amazing collaboration my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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For sure. She brought the fire. I miss doing collaborations but I also don’t know if I would do another one. Maybe because the people I did them with felt special to me and I want to keep it that way.
Thanks for the read friend. Much appreciated.
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This is sweet with a touch of trouble. “Red Dress” Nice