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Written a while ago, I thought i might serve as an introduction to my poetry.

 

A Poem

 

oo0oo

 

Dream like,

innuendo breathes deep

moving slowly in a heart beat.

And then you said, ‘Hi’.

Reality

flowed quickly from a dream.

 

What is a dream

but a shadow roaming the mind.

Illusive, like fire in a red dress

dancing bare foot to music

only you can hear.

 

And then you said, ‘Hi’.

 

oo0oo

 

~~redzone 6.9.09

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    1. Hi Curt,

      I really enjoyed this – it has such a dreamy, floating quality, I love how it moves from the soft, floating imagery of dreams into the sudden jolt of reality. “And then you said,” ‘Hi.’” The image of a dream as “fire in a red dress dancing barefoot” is striking and memorable. It feels like a brief, beautiful moment where fantasy and reality touch. Dreams inspire me. This piece resonates with me

      • Exactly RomaJ. Thank you. If I remember correctly, this dream woke me up. Unfortunately, there was no “reality” of her dancing in a red dress, barefoot or otherwise. Oh well. Dreams do inspire. It inspired this poem. Thanks again for your kind words and visit.
        -Curt

      • To be honest, I was roaming through some of my notebooks and found this poem. So in one sense, yes, there was some Deja vu involved. But it was a dream I had back then (2009) that found its way on paper.

        Thank you, Tim, for your comment and perspective on this poem.
        -Curt

    2. Thank you, Damian, for your wonderful comment, your visit, and your ‘welcome’ to SR. I am glad to be here. As I get more acclimated to the site, I will do a lot more reading. Reading some of your creations is near the top of the Read List.
      Thanks again,
      -Curt

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