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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

The Great Deceiver

Poetry

September 21, 2025

19

Fueled by a consuming rage Pointed at every situation As I fall into the final stage Right before the initiation Locked inside self-torment Wiggling out of the noose Keeping all the spirits dormant Until madness is busting loose Pressure building within me Anger clouding all that I see Face...

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19 Comments
- Atticus Abbey
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Great!
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Fia Naturie
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  This is really good. Damian <3
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Oh yeah, this one definitely needs a place on the album! I hope it’s coming along well! The halls are a bit echo-ey without you wandering them as often, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s going, though it took a while to get my “Logic Pro” software. Which allows me to mix better and I can even master my music with it. But, I got a song mapped out structurally, I have lyrics for everything but the bridge. Which I just came up with that bridge tonight. Gotta record vocals, and backing vocals next. Hopefully, I’ll be letting you hear it soon. I miss you too, my friend. You’ve been penning some excellent work my friend. Thanks for your continued support, it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Powerful work. Superb.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Great work. I get an image of a man struggling with who to trust.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Pretty much. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- RomaJ
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I get the sense of internal conflict, and the rhythm and urgency make it clear these are lyrics meant to be performed.
  
  The energy builds perfectly toward the chorus: “Face to face with destiny…” I especially like the line “Loyal to the art of betrayal” – it’s a great, concise piece of wordplay.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I love that line as well. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Tim
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  More great lyrics, Damian. Very heavy stuff. I hope to hear the music someday.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. When I get some songs finished, I’ll let you check them out. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  A kickin piece my friend. Your a gift to the world with your writing.
  - Damian DeadLove
    10 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Thanks for the continued support brother, means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Neville
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Well poemed my friend .. 😎👍
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
    - Neville
      9 months ago
      
      My pleasure entirely .. 👍
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

seduce

Poetry, Spirituality, Uncategorized

September 20, 2025

10

there is a code of flameeach spark and tendrillicking the airspreading the heata sacredness of smokeas it rises all the way to the heavensa magic in fireit can warm or burna destructive forcea beautiful transforming desireit licks at the...

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10 Comments
- RPM
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Wonderfully written. I could feel the warmth of the fire!
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    thank you graciously ❤️
- Atticus Abbey
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Fantastic!
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    thank you dearest Adagio ❤️
- Fia Naturie
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  You always put the perfect image with your poems. Love this.
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    thank you beautiful ❤️
- Thomas W. Case
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Powerful work. Superb.
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    thank you dearest Thomas ❤️
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

glow

Poetry, Romance, Uncategorized

September 20, 2025

8

mellow in the moment I smilecareening in the energywith a golden feelingcaress your aura because I love youchills felt by both of usbeautiful emotion lustI'm doe eyed over youmagic woman with witchy wayslays my guard downallowing you access to...

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8 Comments
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Elegant wording and oh, so sensual.
  
  Love making is much more than the physical act, especially when the hearts speak to each other so loudly.
  j.
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Jacob ❤️
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Brenda. Such a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
- Benjamin Scraps
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  There is an effortlessness to you now. You keep glowing, Crim…
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    thank you dearest Benjamin that is beautiful to me ❤️
- RPM
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Really wonderfully written. I love the third stanza in particular…powerful vulnerability
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest RPM ❤️
Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 10 months, 3 weeks ago

Broken Hearted Pen

Poetry

September 19, 2025

10

When days are punctuated with a swirl of a penAnd breaths are held waitingfor the moment that thoughtand reality becomes one Somewhere in my twilight mindWords were written and sentOn wings translucent and etherealSummoning you to me You never answerAs I...

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10 Comments
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  I have done a fair amount of cursing in my day, Fia.
  But the muse turns a blind ear.
  j.
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    I agree with you, thank you
- Benjamin Scraps
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Sometimes it feels like certain people are drawn into your life for different reasons, not always for communication or connection, but for maybe even deeper philosophical meanings than even those can provide (I recommend all the Stoics, of course) It always pays to patient…and observant. Good form and thoughtfulness.
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you and yes certain people are drawn into your life for different reasons.;))
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Fia. Always dig your musings my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
- Fia Naturie
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thank you ;))
- Knight
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  A very striking and succinct piece. A fire burns in these verses.
  Regards James
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, James;))
- emmagreen
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Your writing always conveys your emotions very precisely, emotionally. I mean this: many thanks for sharing what appear to be deep, deep feelings. Can only hope that time will lessen the pain felt as soon as can, Fia.
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you emmagreen ;))
Crimsin wrote a new post

• 10 months, 3 weeks ago

seek

Poetry, Spirituality, Uncategorized

September 18, 2025

6

it is with pause I reflecthalting over my troubled daysonce I thought I was nicebut that proved to be untrueby the choices I madebut by the grace of God as they sayI've been blesseddignity and abusemy days were filled...

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6 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Terrific write
  
  🙏
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    hello dearest Benny thank you graciously❤
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  10 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  we own our choices good or bad. And for those we regret, we can ask forgiveness and do what we can of good deeds to even up the ledger. Similar to what the Chorus in Oedipus spoke of at his end.
  Fate took him in one direction…he attempted to take himself as far as he could in the other before his death.
  Really good piece.
  j.
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    hello dearest Jacob I do my best and it is hard to let go of regret but I ask forgiveness and I do try to focus on being positive thank you for your thoughts on this❤
- RPM
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I really appreciate an honest piece like this. The inner monologue was captivating. Thanks for sharing it.
  - Crimsin
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    thank you graciously dearest poet I often do that I’m happy it worked for you ❤️
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