That is spooky Daniel.;)_

I have seen my grandmother in my dreams. To see in real it’s scary. I liked the line to reign better than serve.

My grandmother she is in her 87 yrs and constantly when I cry she says don’t cry for past your life is ahead go live.

Now I still cry but my tears heavy they roll in my eyes falling drop by drop

Jessy Jacob ❤️

Damn girl this is edgy. Love it.

Hey Fia! Thanks chica!
I was in my feelzzz. Hahaha
Hey have a great day!

hello beautiful Adelphina I can feel your fire here lovely lady…you are lovely no matter what light you’re bringing but this is really you ❤️

Dude! You made my evening with your comment. Hahaha
I wanted to write something different and edgy and I wanted to cuss. lol
It’s fun to let loose and just go with it and see where it goes.
And hell yeah, take no prisoners! Rrraaarrrrr.

Hahaha you are too freaking cool amigo!
Rock on!

Is someone just a little fired up? Kinda crazy we are doing this while watching each other on facetime. LOL. I keep sneaking peeks at ya! I can’t think of anything to say, just things to do!
We are way too goofy. But I love it.
Anyway hotstuff, what a fuego write! I’m in a devouring mood!
April 29th!

(I have to tighten up the headboard before you get back. We are killing it! What!)

Hell yeah, girl! Get it! 🔥
❤️k

Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write with a lot of fire my friend. Amazing flow with a lyrical vibe, makes sense being you’re listening to music. I know I’m not alone now, I write while listening to music as well. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Talk about a cataclysmic write! I bet this was fun to capture! 🙌

Hi H!

I would love to see your closet, I’m intrigued now. Haha
And I have seen your brain!
It’s a beautiful brain- you are an awesome writer- don’t forget that!
You should have a little spice daily chica.
At least one little teaspoon a day, just like honey. It’s good for your soul. Trust me!
I’m so happy to see ya on my page sister!

Love ya and miss ya!

Vivid and sharp.

Love this one Lady it has teeth, tight

How to start with this. This is excellent!
Your interpretation of how she adored and suffered his life and loss is truly amazing. A weaving journey through her thought process. How the world can exhaust even the strongest of spiritual character but away from prying eyes, he remembers the blessings of also being human.

These are gems baby! Honestly:)
Needs to be put in your book!

And I, sir, appreciate your steady support of my efforts here. I try my best to make them matter. So thank you.

Thank you Tim. It was a lot of work, including jotting down little notes while working at my job thursday and friday. I do maintenance at an older apartment complex, very busy most of the time. But, the creative ideas wait for no work. LOL.
I know that this write, because of the title, the header picture, etc, will keep many people away. But I hope those who do read it get something positive from it. There are several gospels not in the bible, some called the gnostics, that tell much different stories from the traditional ones picked to be in the King James version. The version of Mary M being His wife is in some of them. So, who really knows by now.
And, I am beating myself up over a part three! Do I, do I not. Grrrr.
I sincerely appreciate your generous comment, Tim. And what you did say is enough. It is awesome.

So, when I finished reading this, I took a deep breath and said, “Jesus!”. And then I laughed to myself, because I was only saying it as an exclamation about your writing and not as a statement of the subject… LOL.

Anyway, this is just beautiful. Not much more I can say. Thank you for sharing it.
❤️k