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Read MoreYou wouldn’t think lonelinesscould breathe between our warm bodies,not when we lie naked togetherclose enough to feel each others breath. But it can.And sometimes, it does.I lie beside you,listening for your soft drift into sleep,hoping,almost praying,that your hand will wander,and...
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Thank you Neville.
Words that make others warm are the best words.🙏
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This is very nice.
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Beautifully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. You bring this to life.
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Thanks for reading and your kind comment.🙏
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Read MoreFroward.I found the word highlighted in my Bible.I remember liking how it rolled off my tongue. And thinking about tongues,all the women I loved over the years came to mind.Red dresses dancingbetween shots of rock gutand sloppy bar bands. Wayward.Full of...
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate it.
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Brilliant .. sums it up perfectly .. Neville
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Thank you Neville. I appreciate you.
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This is fantastic poetry writing my friend! Gritty, strong, like a shot of whiskey. Colorful, great story telling, and imagery. Great work.
John
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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Waw raw and I can see the imagery in this.
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Thank you so much.
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Goldenmyst said it accurately. I concur wholeheartedly.
But, thunderbird? My god, man. At the least Seagrams 7 !!! LOL
This is very good writing. A bullseye on a dartboard of a swanky bar life.
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lol. Thank you, my friend.
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Outstanding and real. Nice work.
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Thank you.
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I love how you wove it all together into a cohesive story. There’s an underlying homage to the women and their fire and marks left on you that ties this all together so beautifully. I can’t help but think you made a difference in their existence as well. Fire water or no, this one is brilliant
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Thank you. I appreciate you.
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Read MoreTHE SECRET OF THE FOREST The first rays of the rising sun dipped the sky in a warm orange-red. Taking a deep breath, the ranger stopped on a small hill and let his gaze wander across the forest. How he...
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It’s beautiful and fantastic, Elke..
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Thank you for this kind. comment, my friend! 🙏
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Beautifully penned, Elke. Excellent storytelling my friend, with such a positive message. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you very much for your gracious comment, dear Damian!
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Very positive and uplifting story.
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Thanks a lot, dear Fia!
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The message, the story & the beauty pours out deeply into my heart. Am marvelous journey with such an exquisite writer.
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Oh Keith, your awesome comment makes me speechless! Thank you, thank you and again thank you, my friend!
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This is seriously lovely and not only took my breath away but replaced some of the cold of a very cold day with some much needed warmth .. Neville