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    Poetic Voyeur

    Why am I drawn to your writing? I'm not sure myself.  Is it because I can see the damage and every word Or is it that I can see you    See, you get so engulfed in every word  To make your point come across? It's...

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    Stars Rite Due Process

    At Stars Rite, we want to make it clear that no member is removed from the site without due process. We believe in fairness, transparency, and maintaining a safe and respectful writing community. Below is an outline of our...

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    witchy

    sadness prevails sorrow ails me and it's hellalterate the pain and the torturecruel intentions aren't for mespeak your mind of coursediscourse isn't minebut if you rile me my mind will respondand deliver your every slight like a rank filemy...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I love the warning you give in this. Giving them perfect opportunity to understand what will happen.

      • hlello beautiful Fia I actually cringe when they do me dirty because even though I don’t wish it retribution is coming… thank you for feeling this vibe I kind of felt bad for writing it it’s usually keep to myself ❤️

    • Dear B,

      You said it! This one cuts right to the core. Some days I want to wear a tee shirt that says don’t test me. Just don’t.
      I even liked the font. Like the write it’s direct and unapologetic. Great piece. H🌷

      • hello beautiful Honoria thank you graciously I kind of felt uncomfortable with this one I don’t know why… I’m happy it spoke to you ❤️

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    a maddening sorrow prevails when all else failssorrow stirred can't be deniedit fills my inner chambersflooding me with the feelingof never was love, for him anywaymy soul cannot reconcile the emotion, with the hurtmy worry, it will not ever...

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    • Chère C.,
      As in:
      I see small lines in your face.
      They are beautiful.
      I had to wait an awful long time for them.
      And now they are Here, I won’t let you go…
      And I would cup your face in my hands.
      Yes, something like this, for sure.
      Warm regards, Gus

    • Great write but not as great as the picture of a beautiful woman.I don’t know if it’s you in the picture or not but there is something seriously attractive about her.
      It’s beauty that goes deeper than skin,wisdom that goes deeper than words,scar tissue that colours the soul.
      🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

      • hello dearest Benny no it is not me just an example of a beautiful older lady…lines and all my feelings got hurt that’s what this write was about I think people should take in all of you to see your beauty… not just the superficial…thank you for the love here ❤️

    • A deep, heartfelt poem Brenda. Well said..xo

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Age has been a humbling experience for me. lol. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    harlot

    dour were the notes I climb to youilliciting dismay I felt disparagedmy bosom heave and I exhale my disdainmy advances rebuffed I was left smitten with no way to rectifyunseeing lust, was covetoussomething happened to me when you let...

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    • Passionately penned, Brenda. Love the layers in this powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you graciously dearest Damian I was listening to a song called Lilith by Peter Grundy when I wrote this ❤️

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