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Read MoreĀ āI'm a sinnerās soul with a rebelās stride Yet a loving heart beats deep inside On my horizon, the shadows grow tall Heavy with clouds before raindrops fall Ā I'm a sin-stained saint, reaching for lightĀ Losing the trail in the middle of flight Soft downpour...
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Thank you very much for your kind comment, dear Gus!
Heartfelt greetings!
Elke
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
this line “When loveās blown away, it rains in the soul of mine” I blew out a breath. This is a lovely poem
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Your lovely comment warms my heart and makes my soul smile! Loads of thanks, Fia! xox
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Thank you for the perfect poem to cheer my miserable rainy night in Epping Forest, England! Lovely poetry. HJ x
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Your appreciative comment is at least as lovely! Thank you! May the sunshine in your heart be always brighter than the shadows life’s hardships can cast!
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You’re a lovely woman, wishing like that! Thank you and Best Wishes, Harriet-Jacqui Furl xx
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Lovely writing Elke.
You don’t post often but when you do I take a breath and smile.🙏
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Smiling back at you with gratitude, dear Peter!
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Excellent crafting. The meter and rhymes are tight! It flows so well, and gives the reader a boost to their mood immediately. Encouraging words are always golden. This is.
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And your kind comments have the ability to bath grey everyday’s life in golden sunshine, dear Styx! xxx
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Beautifully penned, Elke. Excellent write with wonderful words of encouragement my friend. Nicely done, a lovely read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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And I highly appreciate you and your always supporting comments, dear Damian! Thanks a lot, my friend! xox
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Hello Elke. Your words and poetry is always so delicately crafted. A beautiful, enlightening piece that showcases your amazing talents. xox
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And your comments are always heartwarming and encouraging, dear Keith! Loads of thanks! XOXO I
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Dear E,
Fab piece. For me, this screams the perfect angel. Heaven sent with a lot of hell. I so enjoyed the imagery and the rhyming meter was great. Iām envious of this form since I canāt do it without sounding like mother goose. Poetry with wings. Well done. H 🌷
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I’m blown away by your kind comment, dear Honoria! 1001 times thank you for your appreciative words! You made my day ! 💐
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Dark edges softened by a tender coreāyour grit and heart live in the same pulse.
Even in the storm, the poem shines, stubborn and kind, like a soul learning to walk straight.
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Read MoreDomainWe get it in downloads and write in clockwork elves Clockwork machines manifested from clockwork selvesSo many Dali clocks on So many shelves. How we made &Make. Letters to break the fetters and make The soul: Shake. The Earth: Quake.Writing-ignitinginShake n bake, baked. I want...
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Iām digging the whole vibe/quake in this.
And I enjoyed the opening, the use of the work clockwork.
Like there are different gears that shift our writing – hence earthquake!
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Thank you Del…
Hoping to get back into the routine of writing…
Very much appreciated…
After I wrote this…
I was thinking about poetry and prose…
Rhyme and off rhyme…
Or like, in this piece, I feel this sort of
approach, with like…Internal rhyme and rhyme shifts…
Well I was just thinking how it effects
the senses…
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I’m digging the Dali within this. I can see the melting clock as I read this. Yet you’ve awakened that clock, for one last tock!
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Thank you Styx…
Very much appreciated…
Gotta love the Dali… š
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Read MoreNot for Lulz for LightIt is a special kind of alchemy, followingsigns ā To which ā Most are blind. Drivenby vision. Possessed by mission, assigned.Mission: Divine. Decision, defined. Acrosspathways of a diamond mind to forever findPoetic skies, in which...
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This is well said. I hope humanity will wake up and see that we are here on this earth together so why go after each other?
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Me too, Fia, me too
Hugs
Jackie
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Powerfully penned, Jackie. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for visiting Damian
Hugs
Jackie
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ChĆØre E.,
A lovely write again!
But what other comment can you expect from the NL fanclub?
We can offer a discount on the yearly membership fee? Specially for everyone who comments favorablyā¦
And they will come around. Just wait and see.
The day after tomorrow iāll be back to read it again.
Warm regards, Gus