Domain
We get it in downloads
and write in clockwork elves
Clockwork machines
manifested from clockwork selves
So many Dali
clocks
on
So many shelves. How we
made
&
Make. Letters to break the fetters
and make
The soul: Shake. The Earth: Quake.
Writing-igniting
in
Shake n bake, baked.
I want your soul
to shake
like
an
Earthquake. I
want
Your soul: Saved. This life
is a maze
of
Pain. Our domain
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Cipher
Pohms
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I’m digging the whole vibe/quake in this.
And I enjoyed the opening, the use of the work clockwork.
Like there are different gears that shift our writing – hence earthquake!
Just fantastic amigo!
Thank you Del…
Hoping to get back into the routine of writing…
Very much appreciated…
After I wrote this…
I was thinking about poetry and prose…
Rhyme and off rhyme…
Or like, in this piece, I feel this sort of
approach, with like…
Internal rhyme and rhyme shifts…
Well I was just thinking how it effects
the senses…
I’m digging the Dali within this. I can see the melting clock as I read this. Yet you’ve awakened that clock, for one last tock!
Cool stuff, Cipher.
Thank you Styx…
Very much appreciated…
Gotta love the Dali… 🙂