Sounds like a cadence call while traveling through the forest of concrete. How we can get lost so easily even when we know where we are. Our heads are balloons, they break free sometimes.
Tight rhymes within this little gem. Great read, Bat.

Beautiful feels, friend.

Such a beautiful poem…love the metaphors used in this lovely piece. Thanks for sharing ❤️

Willow you are a strength personified in this piece. Beautiful piece

Strong and do we say sensual or steamy? This maybe the first time we read you like this, tight

Chère W.,

Reading time Less than 1 min. A promise, a threat?
no need to dilute it for my sake. Since it’s in English, and I am intent to come to grips with the words, my reading time is less than 2 minutes. Alas…..
And I think it’s beautiful.
In fact I love your writes to bits.
And this is another one of them!

Warm regards, Gus

I like to watch people, but not in a stalker way, LOL. I am just curious in how we all are wired, and what gets out from inside our heads. Mannerisms, etc. Your piece here is a great mapquest to Willow. Not full of hype, but the nuances that make you unique. Well described, Willow.

What an amazing comment, Peter! Thank you! I try to approach erotica from a different angle 😊

Thank you so much, Thomas! I’m glad it conveyed the feelings behind the words enough to be seen. 😊

I love me some word play. And I’m not very conventional with my erotica, I guess. Thank you, bro 😊

This is the kind of poetry which I adore, I connect and bond with, I get jealous from! This is beyond beautiful my friend, beyond a very well written masterpiece, it runs deep so deep inside that it brought tears to my eyes. As much as it’s sensual and passionate as much as it bares your soul, the poetic, the wounded, the strong soul of yours, You are your poetry and how You should be treated is how Your poetry should be treated too, with care, with thoughtfulness, with feeling, with open heart and mind, those who don’t look beyond the words are not welcome. This is a sacred gem. You deserve a sky full of stars🌟🌟🌟 You are indeed special. Bless You 💜

One more cup of coffee…. I understand the procrastinations. How is can be riding on a person’s back to delay things you want to do and accomplish.

Thankyou Damian

Bat

Thank you Fia. Have a great day this day!

Bat

Sometimes the pause takes longer than we expect.

There’s a relatable tug-of-war here between wanting to move forward and finding every comfortable excuse to stay exactly where you are, with the sun and clock quietly reminding the speaker that time isn’t waiting. The last “One more cup of coffee” is the perfect little surrender—it undercuts all that determination with the wonderfully human truth that sometimes the first step is just another damn cup of coffee.

Thank you Mr. Case. I think I’ll have another now! Have yourself a wonderful day.

Bat