I guess we can see ourselves in everything nature has to offer… a tree rising then withering away, a leaf dancing in the wind then falling to the ground, a cloud flying above then evaporating in the sky… a beautiful poem

yay! You posted something! And gee, how ironic that this one and my latest mimic the other. Almost like we are linked somehow!
This is beautiful, like you! I love the expressive wisdom that is delicately placed within the lines. It attaches some history as an acknowledgement, but moves on to your present day, and how you feel enveloped in a calming day.
Wonderful baby.

Beautifully penned, Adel. Another excellent write with spectacular imagery my friend. You always manage to paint a picture with your words. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Well this is musing. lol
liked the people like privacy they get intrusion part really good

thoroughly enjoyed Damian .. & then some .. Neville

Hellish visions. Intense feeling.
Regards
James

A bit towards the apocalypse in its foretelling, yeah? I also get a “War Pigs” vibe as well (Black Sabbath).
Excellent rhyme scheme as well. Great write Damian.

Wow, one more of your excellent, intense and thought provoking right things, dear Damien! Especially the last verse speaks to me a lot. World most people consider God as all seeing eye that is watching and judging us, all sing that UI energy is just experiencing itself, manifested and the form of a human being. So it is entirely up to us what to do with our lives. Personally, I think it is best to listen to our heart and to our intuition. Why won’t lead us a stray.

willow… wow… when I heard this its as if I was sitting on that porch listening to the the story… amazing

Beautiful. I love this. Powerful. Vivid and sharp.

First off, the rhyme scheme is on point. I can tell you really had to pull some crafty words to make the rhyme and tempo stay true. You succeeded. The story within is great, it follows through well and ends with a great mood.
Awesome Willow.

I just listened to the recording! The music matched the tone of your write perfectly.
Even the voice! I’m all for letting go of dead weight in any write. Nicely done:)

Powerfully penned, Willow. Another excellent write that exercises demons while telling this tale of survival my friend. The music sets the mood as the voice delivers the truth while speaking your words with precision. Goosebumps on this one. Amazing read/listen as always. Appreciate you, Sis.

Damian