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hello dearest Nick good morning I think as we get older because for one thing I know I was fearless and careless when I was younger..now I am careful and cautious understanding each moment is important thank you for the love here hugs on our shared pain in the night 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning Damian I hope you have a beautiful day thank you my friend 💕
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Vivid and sharp.
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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously have a great night 💕
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Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
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hello good morning dearest Gus I wasn’t writing yesterday and that line kept coming to mind just one line so I sat down and wrote it I’m happy it held your interest and you liked it great eye 💕
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This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!
Daniel
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hello dearest Daniel thank you graciously for the love on this write 💕it is deeply appreciated…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you pardon my tardy response I appreciate you 💕
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Read MoreI let myself bleed to breathe. I write out what I need to… Allowing myself to be lacerated by the world's harsh judgments, however, as I bleed, I begin to breathe! Ink bleeds out of my wounds onto the page, and I transcribe what...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Danile this is fantastic always be yourself and I will to 💕
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Brenda, your comment makes me want to ask you to write a piece yourself with the same title! I’m curious and I’m sure I would love what you would create!
Daniel
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it’s funny I wrote a poem called breathe after you and before I saw yours we are on the same wavelength 😊
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Same wavelength of talent… a wavelength only the talented can see! 😉
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Your writing goes under my skin. Intense as if it was really written with heart blood. Perfectly written, Daniel!
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Vielen Dank, Elka! Fühlst du mein Schreiben unter deiner Haut? Das bedeutet, dass ich das erreicht habe, was ich mir hier gesetzt habe! You should see what I see behind my eyes so I can write like this! Hahaha!
Tschüss!
Daniel
Gotisch-Surrealistisch
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Nice rhythm love the joker in batman creation
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Joker, is pure madness. lol. Funny enough the first two lines came from lyrics to an old song that J.J. Burton and I wrote together. The rest of the words weren’t up to par. But always loved those first two lines. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Welcome to Gotham.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Welcome to Gotham, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Why so serious? Lol 🃏
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Such an iconic Joker line. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s not really about the Joker, to be truthful. The first two lines are from an old song that was just a silly song that J.J. Burton and I penned the words to in like 1993. But I always liked the first two lines, so I just wrote something else to them. He mentioned the Joker because he was a fan, and I just used that to make the first two lines. lol. A little backstory for you, I always ramble on. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian I really liked this one I guess the joker would kind of be Lucifer always laughing at peoples pain really your poem rocks as they do anyway 💕
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I think the joker could be Lucifer, but I was also thinking that darker side we all have inside. Really it could apply to any form of a personal demon, different to each person. Sorry for rambling. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The first thought I have is a person or boss egging you on while you struggle.or just being smug. Laughing at your pain kinda thing.
Great ink, friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s also a possibility, it could kinda be that person that’s a thorn in my side. Great commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As usual, I may be reading this wrong. But I’m feeling a sense of apathy is just as deadly as hate/evil. Those who don’t speak up for others, give their silence as a voice to the bullies. It definitely has my mind going, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see that, you always have cool insight to the meaning, always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreNight bore witness to our wild union. It was a hot night along the arched passageway leading into the castle chapel from the expanse of the courtyard. The ancient stone passage was torchlit and our...
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Thank you! Part two coming out by tomorrow morning and things get steamier hahahaha 😆
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Hehehe go ahead and fantasize! Part Two out tonight or tomorrow morning hahaha 😆
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Erotic writing at its best! You’re a great storyteller, eloquent and creative. This piece is damned hot!!!
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In der Tat, erotisches Schreiben von meiner besten Seite! Ich weiß, dass ich ein großartiger Geschichtenerzähler, Dichter, eloquent und kreativ bin, und dieses Stück ist verdammt heiß!!! So heiß, dass es mich aufregt und ich kann nicht aufhören zu schreiben, Elke. Wie immer, vielen Dank!
Daniel
Gotisch-Surrealistisch
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The night is also when the pain hits for me. I don’t know how it is for others but the older I get the more painful life becomes. More stressful and overwhelming. Guess getting help would be best, but I’m kinda the strong one that holds up my little world. No time for breakdowns.
*Hug* you’re not alone, friend.