hello dearest Sam love is a powerful emotion and sometimes does this to us…here is a song that makes me think of your poem in a way great and passionate write ❤️

personally my heart still falls for people but I know I’ve fucked up way too badly to let anyone is now… it would be like inviting them to hell… I still desire and long though for it to be different…

I love how you put the cause and effect of love.
It’s not always pretty.
Enjoyed how you put it in the simplest form.
The longest line was five words!

Bingo!

This is so good. I’m glad you discovered the why, Sam. Take an Advil it works wonders.

Well said, Sam. I’m glad you figured out why, sometimes all it takes is time and a random question. I concur with your conclusion as well. Appreciate you.

Damian

Well said Sam.

I’ve used AI on some occasions to tidy up grammar etc just like an editor would do.So if used as a tool and declared openly AI is not a problem.It only becomes a problem when the author claims the AI result as their own.
To that end,it might be worthwhile before submitting a post, if there was a tick box which simply asks “was AI used in this upload’.
Honesty is what we want on Stars

Exactly! Cheers 🥂

I don’t know that I’m able to tell for sure other than the overuse of the em dash. But in general about AI, I dislike feeling like I have to scope things out in that way when really I just want to enjoy some words (and yes connect to them), if that makes sense.

You have a wonderful site going, Sam. I am happy to feed some of my drivel into it, LOL.
I’d like to see a bigger/broader audience, but the only person I’ve asked so far to join, turned me down. Shyness!
Be very proud of what you have going here. And with Fia kickin it too, y’all are doing awesome.

Very Nicely done

hello dearest Sam I hope people enjoy my worlds of imagination mixed with my realities and I hope there are people who can identify and if not dream with me…sometimes I fail to be grateful because I get hurt when I don’t make a connection but this is usually because I am not reaching out or being very approachable…I deeply appreciate being here and what you have done for us…I write different kind of poetry for allpoetry…here I am writing for family and that illusive love I can sense but not touch in the flesh anyway my heart believes my soulstory has moved them…your idea is beautiful and will do my best to have a good attitude so often in life I feel unpopular but that really isn’t it it’s more akin to a little sister with five much older brothers who joy is to razz their little sister my gullability makes it fun…but wow when it comes to being protestive our family is thank you ❤️