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Thank you for your kind words Thomas!
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“We clone our fears
Copy-paste the pain
Pouring out the doubts like drops of rain
Lessened by the scars we quietly bear
Weakened by the reasoning we wouldn’t dare”Powerfully penned, Drieks. Excellent lyrics my friend, that verse I quoted, is so raw and authentic. Amazing arrangement that enhances these amazing words. I’m a fan. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey Damian! I’m so happy you liked it. It means a lot to me. Thank you!
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The lyrics and voice breathe in that space between hope and desolation, where very few are self-aware enough to tread. A glittered gift you possess. May I ask of your music influences? Without music the world dies.
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Thank you Ghosteen! I couldn’t agree more! Music is a necessity.
We need water, food, oxygen, love and music!
My music influences are very broad. For this particulair piece i’d say Sia was the main influence.
In general, my influences come from pop, hip-hop, dance, rock, EDM and propably some more i can’t think of right now haha.-
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Listen to some Nick Cave, Mazzy Star and the Cocteau Twins. If you can replicate the latter’s incomprehensible & ethereal voice & lyrics, I shall make a donation to an animal and children’s charity. Keep on keeping on. “Life imitates art far more than art imitates life.” As some bloke called Wilde once scribbled. Respect – not in the way uttered by a gangsta’ rapper. Not my thang. But genuine, UK respect.
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This song hits me differently when I feel so tired and head is pounding from the beginnings of a migraine. Its like I can feel
this line “Oh the shadows speak when the lights go dim, Invisible projections crawl from within”
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Very relatable unfortunately. Migraines can take control over so many things all at once.
Thank you for your kind words Fia. 🙏🏻
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Read MoreCan I speak to you?raw and openof a once mesmall and soft like a snowflake,coarse and demandinglike the snow.of a once me,loved by one rulethe rule of infinite divinity.Wasted in the devastationof war and mundanenessa once me,never wanted youor them...
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Tremendous. Vulnerable and real. Powerful writing.
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Good Morning🤍 and thank You for your true words and kind visit. Much appreciated*
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Lovely thoughtful beautiful
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Read MoreElsie, Elsie, ring your bell,bring here all the boys.Summon back the ones who diedfrom where they were deployed.~Bandage up their arms and legs,Take away their fears.Erase the flashbacks in their mindsthat always re-appear.~Tell them it was just a dream,The...
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The poem was written with compassion and I felt it .
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Thank you, Fia.
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I love this! What a great read on Veteran’s Day!
Thank you for posting this.
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Wow! If he was alive I’d thank him for his courageous service. Thanks for the comment, Adelly. 🙂
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Tim, this really took me into Elsie’s heart and what she meant to our wounded men. I could feel the emotions here and the depth of your remembrance for her and the men she gave solace in their darkest hours. Truly a great poem.
John
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I appreciate the comment, John. Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write and a heartfelt tribute my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much, Damian.
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hello beautiful Fia beautifully written and inspirational my sister is currently a commander in the Navy she started in the Marines where she became the first female to be part of a Helo squad she has been deployed all over including Iraq… this write of your reminded me how important these people are to the peace we enjoy here thank you ❤️
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I gave Fia the message, crimsin.
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Excellent piece of writing Tim. Well said and emotionally driven. The words shine bright. Nice work.
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Thanks very much, Voi. 🙂
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