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Read Moredare you breathe menot air,dare I lit my love in your eyesin your heart. on earth, I walk my last timeundefeated and opened,as I've walked heavens many times I do know,the difference betweenthe touch and the sensation,between others and you. ...
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Good Coffee Morning ☕
PLEASE, share and ask anything, it’s how we develop besides my English isn’t the best😊
I mean the verb of “light”, lit, kindle… if You have suggestions or if You have other thoughts, I’m opened ears.
Thank You again for such a kind and heartwarming visit, yesterday out of nowhere the first words of this poem were ringing in my head, so I said there is no problem in sharing something old. I’m happy I did 😊
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I love the idea of poems as morsels of our soul.
Lovely write.
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Hi my friend 🌺
Thank You for your lovely visit and sweet words You left on my page, much appreciated*😊
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Truly lovely. It’s gentle yet strong in its invitation. A lure perhaps. Of allure!
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It’s also lovely that You could see it as “gentle yet strong” because it’s what I meant it to be😄. short, brilliant and a truly appreciated review! Thank You gratefully my friend ✨
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Hi there sweet friend 🌸
your words are gentle and calm, radiates with true kindness. Thank You deeply for feeling with it your heart🤍 may your days be filled with light, peace, and love✨🕊️💕
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How I wish I had got here first .. I had been waiting for these words to ease or take away my hunger .. Having said that, I am not surprised that so many others beat me to them as I imagine those that have visited you before were just as hungry as me .. Another keeper as far as I am concerned .. Shine on dear Light now and always .. Your friend, Me .. 💛⭐🌟⭐🌟🌻👍
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Neville never fails to make G girl’s heart smiles and flatter💓 I’m really and truly grateful for your words and friendship🤍 may your heart knows only joy and happiness ✨🙏🏻✨ your friend too, Me*
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Yeaaaahhhh 😎💛🌟⭐🌷🌻👍
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Hi there sweet friend 🌸
your words are gentle and calm, radiates with true kindness. Thank You deeply for feeling with it your heart🤍 may your days be filled with light, peace, and love✨🕊️💕
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I’ve checked some of your poems yesterday but there were unavailable to leave reviews, I thought I should tell You this 😊
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I did read your Bio before checking your poems, so all is understand, it’s your respected choice to protect yourself and your poetry at the time being, Nice to meet You Fiery friend 🔥😊
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The same to you lovely friend🌺 and a very Good Morning to you🌞 (it’s 10:31 am here). Have a fantastic beauty day, night and all times 🤍😊
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Tremendous work.
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Thank You my friend for your time and uplifting review😊much appreciated*
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Beautifully penned, Light. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreWithin verdant stillness, it breathes—exhalation of peace in stone.Silence carves itself into serenity,each line straightens to temporality. Eyes half-closed to all becoming,he sees what cannot be unlearned:the world forever shaping itselfaround folded edges of release. Here, calm is not absence but...
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The jade Buddha sits in silence. “Silence carves itself into serenity,”
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Beautifully penned, S. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Libellule, only a poet as gifted as you can take a jade carving and make it into a journey into the heart of timelessness itself. There is truth here that lives and breathes in the air of your poet’s soul.
John
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When we write our words, we do leave pieces of us on the page. We are the words, we are the message that we want the reader to “breathe” in and savor. Your pen name, as one of the fundamental elements, is what is seen, heard and felt in this poem, Light! The air that words breathe!
-Curt
(ps. in your 3rd line did you mean to say “lit” or “light’ or “lite”?? I hope you don’t mind my asking.)