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Read MoreAre you ever anxious about the grocery store? I doubt you go outside thinking maybe I'll see her today Do you think about how your face would look when you see me? My doubt cycles over and over... a spiritual shoe in...
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Go back and edit at the last two lines. There’s a space in the word “shoe”.
We always wonder if past lovers think about us… it’s a natural thing. Particularly at the grocery. And for all you guys out there that fucked me… yes, I remember you – particularly in produce when I’m looking through the cucumbers.
Seriously, Blue – I can relate. Now put your shoes in the dryer and go back for that check out boy.
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The metaphor of the shoe in the washing machine certainly heightens the auditory senses in the overall underlying anxiousness.
Great work Blue.
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Read MoreThere's always that person that is shrouded in maybes Of missed moments, shared glances Maybe even stolen kisses and touches Ambivalence lacing that the purest longing sorrow It's a wretched thing to get close to Everest And just end up with your heart as...
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Powerfully penned, Blue. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Or… the dude could have been a serial killer, and you missed out on a painful death. If Ted Bundy had been wandering around my campus when I was in school, just damn. I’d have jumped on that Volkswagen gearshift in a heartbeat.
I get you, though. Missed opportunity. It’s tough when you’re a girl. Guys think you’re being too assertive, but they always miss the signals.
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Like Damian stated, I also found this powerful. Not everyone can make it to the summit for whatever reasons, but your analogy here is strong.
Nicely penned.
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Read MoreThe warmth of my tongue enters Kissing the lips of her parted petals Usual suspects repeat offenders Sweet moans as her rhythm settles Lost in passion moving to the flow All the worries give way to pleasure Tension fades releasing angelic glow Melting in my cadence...
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Great title
Pleasure journey
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Speak. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I liked the title as well, kinda stands out there, you dig? Definite pleasure journey. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love this piece Damian. Well written my friend.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I read the title, the summary &…my jaw still dropped when I started reading the actual poem! Ya turnin’ up the heat in here, my friend!
Side note, when I started my hand at erotica, I was so self-conscious that I created an alternate account on DUP to hide behind while I worked out how & what my erotic voice sounds like. I remember you saying you always worry it sounds corny…absolutely nothing corny about your erotica, my friend! 🔥
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Ok, maybe I’m not as horrible at writing erotica as I thought I was. But you’re right, it’s not my most confident voice. lol. Anyhow, I’m not shutting them out like I used to, if I have an idea I entertain it now. Thanks for always being so supportive my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like this style of erotica.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Reggie. So glad you liked the write my friend. I prefer this style as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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damn. excellent write.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ambjr. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Oh, you’re a boy with a beat, Damian. I can feel it. Music all over it.
“All the worries give way to pleasure” – got the Marvin Gay “Sexual Healing” going on.
You can be my ‘Repeat Offender’ any time.xoxo
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. That’s a huge compliment, “Sexual Healing” and Marvin Gaye that’s stellar company. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This was from an inspiration. Very well done and had all the right elements. Love it. ;))
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Yeah, it was inspired. You wrote an erotica piece, then Willow had one, Then Meg, Then Mary, then Naaj. I’m sure there were others, it was like everybody was writing erotica that day. lol. So I followed suit. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Trying to find hope in a valley of despair, I’ve been there my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It’s hard not to be beat down by all the negativity these days. It’s good to remember that we can make our own happiness.
Thanks for the read, friend.
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I wrote the original many years ago. I think I was just wanting to write more inspirational poetry. Though with this one I wrote it and didn’t really like it, then I reworked it and released it on DUP, still didn’t like it. I reworked it again now and I kinda like it haha.
I always feel blessed to see you my friend. Many hugs for you 🤗 🤗 🤗
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Dammit, I wish I could bookmark this! From beginning to end, you had me. This one is deep. Life takes bites outta our ass everyday. To be able to recognize it’s easier as a collective…it’s huge. Community is the gold we actually need
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I think this is another way of reminding myself to just be a good person. I think we all take things very personal these days. But I think deep down we all want the same things.
Thanks for the read, friend. Very much appreciated.
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This is like Beat Poetry. Inspirational and powerful. There are so many amazing lines. I love this one..
“always looking for forgiveness
finding out no one’s hands are clean
in this red room we call life”Everyone is on the same playing field and no one’s voice should be more important than your own.
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No one’s perfect, or rather no one’s innocent.
Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.
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Cleverly penned, Blue. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian