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Read MoreSometimes I think about the cruelty you went through What purpose was given to you from high above How is it that a child can be brought to this world Unwanted, neglected, malnourished and unloved But when you said how the market ladies...
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Read MoreOnline warfare being waged everyday Some tech-pimp living in a wet dream Everything on the menu is pay to play Swinging pendulum picking up steam Broken hearts corrupted by confusion Unable to see through this cold illusion Artificial beast hides without disguise Cyborg sex doll disregards...
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Well this is musing. lol
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked that line as well. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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thoroughly enjoyed Damian .. & then some .. Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hellish visions. Intense feeling.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, James. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes intense feelings guide the poem along in my experience. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A bit towards the apocalypse in its foretelling, yeah? I also get a “War Pigs” vibe as well (Black Sabbath).
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see the “War Pigs” vibe too. Sabbath has always been an influence in my creative efforts. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow, one more of your excellent, intense and thought provoking right things, dear Damien! Especially the last verse speaks to me a lot. World most people consider God as all seeing eye that is watching and judging us, all sing that UI energy is just experiencing itself, manifested and the form of a human being. So it is entirely up to us what to do with our lives. Personally, I think it is best to listen to our heart and to our intuition. Why won’t lead us a stray.
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Sorry for the typing Arrows, Damian!
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Read Morewisdom can be a funny thing sometimes it's a special delivery... hidden in words spoken quite casually others...it lands with a resounding ring like the day that bell sounded for me I met her the summer before my liberation she was the reason my abuse...
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willow… wow… when I heard this its as if I was sitting on that porch listening to the the story… amazing
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Beautiful. I love this. Powerful. Vivid and sharp.
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First off, the rhyme scheme is on point. I can tell you really had to pull some crafty words to make the rhyme and tempo stay true. You succeeded. The story within is great, it follows through well and ends with a great mood.
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I just listened to the recording! The music matched the tone of your write perfectly.
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Another excellent write that exercises demons while telling this tale of survival my friend. The music sets the mood as the voice delivers the truth while speaking your words with precision. Goosebumps on this one. Amazing read/listen as always. Appreciate you, Sis.
Damian
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Read MoreWhen human minds begin to fray And souls forget their tune The ones who stand apart and judge Believe they're still immune. But we're all so bloody fragile, Our thoughts can lose their form; No soul beneath the turning sky Can shelter from that storm. Each person...
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Hi Peter
How are you?
You expressed so much in few lines.Jessy Jacob
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I’m fine and thanks for asking.
This poem was prompted by a newspaper article about a woman who changed completely after menopause…..we are very fragile.
🙏
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It’s the ones who insist they’re fine when clearly they’re not that scare me. We humas are very fragile indeed
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Well you’re right! And sometimes we think we know them, until we realize that we don’t. The mind is each of our own little universe, it’s so vast. Some people get off track along the way.
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Another excellent write with lots of layers my friend. No one is immune to time and the effects it has on the mind. Thanks for sharing. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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