The warmth of my tongue enters
Kissing the lips of her parted petals
Usual suspects repeat offenders
Sweet moans as her rhythm settles
Lost in passion moving to the flow
All the worries give way to pleasure
Tension fades releasing angelic glow
Melting in my cadence and measure
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2025
Great title
Pleasure journey
BIG LIKE
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Speak. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I liked the title as well, kinda stands out there, you dig? Definite pleasure journey. Appreciate you.
Damian
Love this piece Damian. Well written my friend.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
I read the title, the summary &…my jaw still dropped when I started reading the actual poem! Ya turnin’ up the heat in here, my friend!
Side note, when I started my hand at erotica, I was so self-conscious that I created an alternate account on DUP to hide behind while I worked out how & what my erotic voice sounds like. I remember you saying you always worry it sounds corny…absolutely nothing corny about your erotica, my friend! 🔥
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Ok, maybe I’m not as horrible at writing erotica as I thought I was. But you’re right, it’s not my most confident voice. lol. Anyhow, I’m not shutting them out like I used to, if I have an idea I entertain it now. Thanks for always being so supportive my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
I like this style of erotica.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Reggie. So glad you liked the write my friend. I prefer this style as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
damn. excellent write.
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Ambjr. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Oh, you’re a boy with a beat, Damian. I can feel it. Music all over it.
“All the worries give way to pleasure” – got the Marvin Gay “Sexual Healing” going on.
You can be my ‘Repeat Offender’ any time.
xoxo
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, DK. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. That’s a huge compliment, “Sexual Healing” and Marvin Gaye that’s stellar company. Appreciate you.
Damian
This was from an inspiration. Very well done and had all the right elements. Love it. ;))
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Yeah, it was inspired. You wrote an erotica piece, then Willow had one, Then Meg, Then Mary, then Naaj. I’m sure there were others, it was like everybody was writing erotica that day. lol. So I followed suit. Appreciate you.
Damian