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Read MoreIt’s just another shitty day in paradise.The sky is a uniform grey,not the ominous kind, but soft and familiar, like my grandmother’s hair. A fine rain drifts down, blown every which way by a world weary wind. Somewhere, birds...
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You and crimsin’s, writes are very powerful tonight. You’re right it is not going to be alright.
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Thanks Crimsin and Fia.
Whilst I think about such things I don’t let it weigh me down or make me angry.To empathize with all who suffer allows me to look out the window with joy….mostly.
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That is good.
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We have a lot to be thankful for, Benny.
I think you’re a hero quietly relaxing in your garden
cape floating around your neck
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As a nurse, you’re the hero.
I’ll settle for being a mote in the eye of whoever created whole shebang.
Thanks for the lovely comment.😘
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Incredible write my friend, phenomenal imagery. Never thought I’d see such sad days. Spot On. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Morehttps://youtu.be/kPa7bsKwL-c?si=OqKCK1km251Wjmu6Music link- Bruno Mars and Lady Gaga. Die with a smile. Please copy and paste while reading, ty❤️ I don’t know his nameHe doesn’t know mine.We met twice in my dreams.The first time,we ran into each otherby happenstanceand we kissed,It...
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This is summer sweetness. I like how they left and met again. Lovely
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Hi Fia, long time no say sweet lady❤️
It was incredible. It felt so surreal and this happened this morning at 4:30 AM. I woke up and I felt like it really happened. The Kisses were passionate. He was beautiful, kind, caring and even though I don’t know him, I could tell he was the kind of man that everyone loves.
Thanks for looking, miss you❤️
Jackie xo
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this is just a dream?.. mmm
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Hi Sam, nice to see you here 🙂
Yeah, it is just a dream, but wow it felt so real. I mean it really felt real and when he told me he loved me. I already knew that.
I believe this was a parallel dream. I believe I do know him in that realm and he knows me. I don’t know his name, he doesn’t know mine, but maybe the next time we meet in my dreams we will know. Or maybe names don’t matter.
Thanks for looking Sam and leaving your comment.
Jackie xo
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What you so pleasantly say in this poem happens to me once in awhile, (not too often sadly).
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I mean it was one of those dreams where you’re half awake but you’re still dreaming and you just continue to finish the dream but I woke up abruptly and I wanted to go back to sleep to finish the dream but I’m taking a new medication and I had a bad reaction. And so, in the moment I wrote about. what I experienced in the dream. Hey for all I know it could be a parallel universe experience and I do know him person, and knows me, and we have met before . Thanks for looking. I appreciate you. Thanks for the comment Jim.
Jackie 🙂-
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Yeah, that happens too. Sometime I feel a loss when I wake up. The dream usually goes unfulfilled. 🙁
I get over it tho.
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I actually had tears when I woke up. It was so surreal Jim.❤️
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Sweet write and dream! From reading your replies I get that its a real dream. Have you looked up its interpretation?
Most of my dreams are incomprehensible and weird but I like making poems out of them. “)-
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My dreams are vivid and a lot of the time they make no sense. But not this time. It was awesome!
Thanks for the visit M.E
Jackie 🙂
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Jackie. A lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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How wonderful to keep seeing you visit my page. I appreciate you too Damian very much🤟🙂
Jackie xoxo
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Glad to be seen Ms Z.
Did you check out my latest from a few day ago?
Maybe you’ll like it.
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This is filled with the magic of love between strangers that transcends all. Bursting with passion and glowing with love. This is a true beauty of poetic inspiration my friend.
John
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It felt like I knew him and he knew me. It was so surreal. Thanks for looking John. I’ll be by to check out what you’ve been writing. Love you.
Jackie ❤️
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Powerfully penned, S. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello lovely poetess I can relate to this great write 💕
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Read MoreDrawn to places of stars, drawing me – Further afar.Pathways dotted with deer Knowing I Have no fear in the gnosis of My going. Breeze whispering dawn. Venus – Pulsating in The horizon – Over movements of trees. Song Swaying like the seas of the seasonsHaving arrays of reasons in their ways. Where I talk the walk of The...
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Beautifully penned, Cipher. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moreall these dreams seem fadeddrowning in the silent seathe stars are all silver jadedloneliness will never set you freepassion burns beneath my hearti’m bringing down the fucking wallswithered thoughts are torn apartinside my mind the voice calls loaded weapon this...
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. You wouldn’t be the first that felt that way, my own mother wanted to slap him upside the head a couple of times. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Superb work.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Reminds me of a poem I wrote around the whole invasion of iraq. The poem is lost to me, but I remember some of the lines were.
“you can go ahead and die for your country
I value my life over everything
and if I’m gonna die
it’s not gonna be me wasted away
for a bunch of fucking creeps”This poem has fire and I love that.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Nice. What you remember of it. I had a lot more fire during this era of my life, I still have fire but I use it differently. At least that’s how it feels anyhow. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m gonna say I would love to throw a shoe at Joey G. If Adira doesn’t get him with her boot first. Ironically, I know a lot of musicians. All young & vibrant…& all in Nebraska. It would be amazing to see your words given the credit & voice they deserve. My partner wanted me to do songwriting for musicians but I shut it down because I “only write poetry.” 🤦♀️ I would write with you any day though. And I’m keeping my fingers crossed that your words are properly heard, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friends. Joey G, has that effect on people. I’ll keep your offer in mind my friend, I’m thinking about trying to use GarageBand to arrange the music, and I’m gonna sing the songs myself. But down the road anything’s possible. I’m curious to see what I can come up with now, that I’m sober. Always open to collaborating. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hi Benny it appears are minds are on similar wavelengths I don’t like to write about war but the suffering is on my mind like I can feel their pain on my own body…when will people realize this fact? great write 💕