This is cool. I can even pour you a drink. Nice

Ted Bundy would smile reading this. 🙂

Powerfully penned, Nick. I concur with Tim, it does give me Bundy vibes. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks friend. Glad you liked my spooky ink 🔏

Hopefully not too scary. Would hate if you lose sleep hehe.

Thanks for the read friend. I very much appreciate it.

This is a good Halloween poem. Life is cruel and die alone is the worst.

Awww. This is writing that comes from everywhere. From watching loved ones go through suffering or ourselves.
Writing is a great escape but sometimes it sticks. There is no escaping but in that moment of writing we are controlling the pen. We are the master of how it’s written. This is powerfully bittersweet.

And I gotta give a shout out to that pic!

Powerfully penned, Nick. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The world can get pretty dark. though I would like to think it’s not about the end but about the now.

Thanks for the read friend.

This is moving and being human is not an easy existence at all

Beautifully expressed. It’s just what I needed to see before I signed off. It is so relaxing and sets the reader in a calm sense of being.
Awesome.

Well said, Peter. A perfect poem.

Big poems start with little thoughts.
Glad you liked it.
💋

Thanks Tim.

Not perfect but true.👍

Nice set up. Can’t wait to read the rest

Powerfully penned, Benjamin. I concur with Fia, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

thunder, now passed,
praising rain on a lean-to…
this high & sky
full of mist & wist,

satisfied shine, rich
with daggered eyes in flight…
earth & alighted, poor
with cosmic delusion…

cockatrice glare
through fog & moon.

‘thunder, now passed,
praising rain on a lean-to…
this high & sky
full of mist & wist,

satisfied shine, rich
with daggered eyes in flight…
earth & alighted, poor
with cosmic delusion…

cockatrice glare
through fog & moon.’

Superbly but subtly visual, pensive yet explicit? Why not, sez I.