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Wrote this in Autumn of 2011. A kind of "prequel" to this poem https://starsrite.com/2025/08/29/the-shape-im-in/

 

 

 

Ancient road
abuzz with those
that long ago
left the pavement

a can of thought
struck with lucid spade…

town chow dry
like a mouse in the oven:

thunder, now passed,
praising rain on a lean-to…
this high & sky
full of mist & wist,

satisfied shine, rich
with daggered eyes in flight…
earth & alighted, poor
with cosmic delusion…

cockatrice glare
through fog & moon.

Venerated dirt
ablaze with this
that is suddenly
vision:

a jar of mind
‘neath moss & spike.

 

 

 

 

 

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    1. thunder, now passed,
      praising rain on a lean-to…
      this high & sky
      full of mist & wist,

      satisfied shine, rich
      with daggered eyes in flight…
      earth & alighted, poor
      with cosmic delusion…

      cockatrice glare
      through fog & moon.

    2. ‘thunder, now passed,
      praising rain on a lean-to…
      this high & sky
      full of mist & wist,

      satisfied shine, rich
      with daggered eyes in flight…
      earth & alighted, poor
      with cosmic delusion…

      cockatrice glare
      through fog & moon.’

      Superbly but subtly visual, pensive yet explicit? Why not, sez I.

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